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By : DiablosAngel
  • From ANON - Arsinen on June 05, 2005
    ok this is good but there something that bothers me about this fic. I do not like how you just keep to Duo's POV I mean it's great and all but you also have to add some depth to the other characters such as in a chapter five them a POV or go into third person POV. I'm just saying it will help for the ohter characters to develop as well as Duo. Well update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nirina Illusier on May 15, 2005
    This is very good, I'm enjoying it immensely...i'm just wondering though...are you going to do anything from Quatre's P.O.V.??
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  • From ANON - okie on May 13, 2005
    wow , please keep going
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  • From ANON - * on April 08, 2005
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  • From insanechildfanfic on February 23, 2005
    this is great. I love it
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  • From insanechildfanfic on February 23, 2005
    this is great. I love it
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  • From LadyFrisselle on February 22, 2005
    Another good chapter. I could wish that the pace was faster but I'm sure that you have your reasons. I'm still curious about Tro's animals though.

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  • From LadyFrisselle on February 22, 2005
    Yippee....You updated... I like this story. I wish the pace went a little faster though but I can deal with that. I know that the guys have special privledges and stuff but why/how does Tro have a panther in the apartment. I know he can talk to animals but...
    Anyways...good story and please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Jhon Doe on February 21, 2005
    You're story is very interesting, but also a little confusing. I have no clue who or what Quatre and the others are. The story needs to be explained a little more by telling the reader who they are and what they do. Most importantly I have no clue what these collars or training signifies or how the main characters were injured. If it isn't to much trouble I would greatly appreciate a little more explanations of the situation so I may view the story the way you are seeing it.
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  • From ANON - Grace on February 21, 2005
    Good one....please continue
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  • From ANON - Hige on February 20, 2005
    This reminds me of the story called Psi Wing by Christine on Gw addiction... Obviously the powers are different, I hope to see what will come from this. I am curious about it and hope that you will continue it.
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  • From LadyFrisselle on February 19, 2005
    Good start. I would like to read more....Btw....Does the cat have a name.

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