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By : BelleVixenBitch
  • From ANON - MeLaiya on March 21, 2005
    oh man, you have got to hurry and update, ur killing me here. This is the absolute best FMA fic i have ever read in my entire life. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ectweak2004 on March 19, 2005
    AGH! soo good! dangit, I hope this ends as good at it starts. Ed is a little bit OOC, but that's okay it fits with the story. and I've got a pretty good idea of where things are going, but if I'm wrong even better!

    5/5 baby! and two thumbs up!
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  • From ANON - Alaskantiger on March 17, 2005
    Great chatper! I can't wait to read more!! Plesae hurry with the next chapter!!! :)
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  • From ANON - arrowsphere on March 17, 2005
    i don't know if you're doing it on purpose but sometimes you write grovewood instead of woodgrove.... is it supposed to be like that? Can't wait to see what happens. Poor Ed and Havoc... ^_^
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  • From ANON - Maxwell-chan on March 17, 2005
    Ehhhhhhh? I'm confused @.X How can Woodgrove be the kidnapper? When Ed first saw her, he said that her hair and eyes were light brown...but you had roy describe her as having dark brown hair and gold eyes...but everything else fits, even how she started to say 'Marcus' but ended up saying 'my son'...but I'm still confused about that last scene in the alleyway, she did turn out to be the crazy woman, right? I'm not sure if I'm making the detective into the kidnapper when that's not what you were writing....x__X;;; Also, I hate to sound nitpicky, but you keep spelling Colonel as 'Cornel'. And hmm, I don't think Ed would have been so submissive and 'yes ma'am'-ish. I think he's more the type to react with anger, rather than fear, even when it would be better to do the opposite. I guess you need him that way for the story to work, but I think it'sOOC.

    Ok, I sound like I'm doing nothing but complaining so I want to say that I do really like this story. It's different from most FMA fics and it's interesting, I really hope you write more! Just thought I'd offer a little constructive criticism. I hope I don't sound mean or anything >.>;;; Err...WRITE MORE *skitters away before she upsets anyone*
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  • From ANON - hallidae on March 16, 2005
    ::full-body shudder:: Eugh, this thing gives me creepy chills. And I love it. I keep picturing the scenes in my head as I read them, and the entire thing comes out very disturbing. Like an old Vincent Price movie, or a German Expressionist film. It's so deliciously suspenseful and evil.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 16, 2005
    hey. i liked this chapter adn i liked the fact that it wsa havoc.
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on March 14, 2005
    Hmm, so is it Hughes Maes? Mustang Roy? Fury? hmm. so many. anyways love the fic. keep up the good work. you know what would be the shit, is if it is Envy in disguise. After all Ed is their puppet and they don't want him to die yet and Envy has this fascination with Ed don't he? coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Childish on March 13, 2005
    The woman really loves her family, eh? But why didn't she outfit her real son with automails?
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  • From ANON - kinky kitty sora on March 13, 2005
    I LIKEY! I LIKEY! HMMM....i know whos goin to be taken!! pick me!pick me!! i know~!! its ROY!! ITS R-O-Y!! MHOHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!! this syory is GREEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOON!! YES UPDATE SOOON!SOON!!
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  • From ANON - crystaladept on March 13, 2005
    I think it's about time I finally reveiw this wonderful story you're writting. I'm one of the people, that if I find a story I can truely sit down and enjoy reading, I will keep returning until it's done. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Al on March 09, 2005
    Hey! Great job, it's really entertaining, I can't wait till you update!!
    Yahh Ed sadists!!!
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  • From ANON - Kildare on March 09, 2005
    Please, please, please update! I just hve to know what happens! They've got to save Ed!!!
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  • From ANON - Pennath on March 09, 2005
    Review! Dear God review!!!!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 08, 2005
    i'm glad you left him in the basement. otherwise the story would have been too obvious. the mad woman is fine except you don't give any descriptions of her phycially. (even though I have myopinion on who she is). basically, i like the story. keep going.
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