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Reviews for A Vivid Dream

By : noomma

From Atropa on April 30, 2005
Ahh.... Hot, hot.... You get me all hooked up on this Kai/Hilary-thing...
You go girl!!!
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From ANON - Tsuki Angel on April 30, 2005
GAAAAHHHHHHH, UPDATE SOON OR ELSE I'LL KILL YOU!!! jk, jk, jk, don't kill me!!!! Anyways, i loved this chapter. I hope you update soon!!!! ^ ____ ^
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From ANON - Radge.pitas.com on April 27, 2005
*In her worshippy position* All hail the author who made this insanely-addictive Fic
We (the readers) hoped that you would update soon...
Man, where the hell did you get these WILD ideas? Books? or maybe the fact that
you already have a relationship?
Anyways, I found your story when I was looking elsewere in this Site then I wondered
"hey, maybe by some chance there's a Kaihil rated XXX story here"
I looked...
"damn YAOI's everywhere! WTF!? Kai and Zeo!?"
After that...
" Hmmmm....Vivid dreams, gotta check this out!"
and here I am. Giving you my reviews and praising you for it.
Gee, it's really hard to imagine if Aoki Takao (the creator) happens to read this
and what would his reaction will be like......*thinks* well, we never know
God bless! anyways and oh yes, UPDATE
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From ANON - BB LOVER on April 23, 2005
I really like that you've introduced other men into this.
But i'm begging you PLEASE don't let Hilary end up with anyone except Kai in the end.
Their so perfect for each other you've done a great job of portraying that.
Once again a brilliant chapter.
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From ANON - kaisgirl112 on April 22, 2005
hi,
i love this truly but it really pissed me off that hilary didnt listen to the rest that he said but then again that is hilary! lol i love this just hope in the next chapter you will get them back together but u can seriously put them into character! dont think this is a flame i LOVE it cos theres not many kai hilarys and this is the best one

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From Atropa on April 22, 2005
I'm really enjoying myself with this story - I think it's great!!
Thumbs up really. It makes me smile every time when I see a new chapter from you.
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From ANON - puff on April 17, 2005
PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY I'LL DIE IF I DON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT PLEASE UNDATE SOON

YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN PUFF

P.S
YOUR STORY KICKS ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - sexy-jess on April 09, 2005
OoOoOoOoohhh!!!
Great work!
I wonder what will happen next?!?!
Hehehe, Tala is such a perv.
Update soon!
from sexy-jess.
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From ANON - eralda on April 08, 2005
hey
so hilary and kai slept togethere Agene well what and I say, except go Hilary go kai lol
Oh plz don�t tern this in to Hilary and Tyson not very good
I really feel sorry for Hilary I think tala really should control his mouth more but I defiantly agree with one thing tala said that lots of hot moments r coming up
Good luck with Ur next chapter
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From ANON - Tsuki Angel on April 06, 2005
........Tala's stupid (Tala fans: HEEEEYYYY!!!!) - _ -U, okay he isn't but Hilary must be really scary if she can scare Tala. Hehe, i like this Hilary but than again she really is like that at G Rev. Anyways I LOVE THIS STORY, I THINK I FELL IN LOVE WITH IT!!!! I hope you update soon....I'll wait patiently (destroying things as to get rid of impatience) can't wait until the next chapter. ^ ___ ^
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From ANON - Tsuki Angel on April 06, 2005
........Tala's stupid (Tala fans: HEEEEYYYY!!!!) - _ -U, okay he isn't but Hilary must be really scary if she can scare Tala. Hehe, i like this Hilary but than again she really is like that at G Rev. Anyways I LOVE THIS STORY, I THINK I FELL IN LOVE WITH IT!!!! I hope you update soon....I'll wait patiently (destroying things as to get rid of impatience) can't wait until the next chapter. ^ ___ ^
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From ANON - kurito on April 06, 2005
Just started reading your fic today and i gave to say that i think it's great.
I simply lover the sex scenes and you portray the charectors really well.
The fighting was so funny. Max and his 'shiner' lol.
Looking forward to the next chappie
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From ANON - BBLOVER on April 06, 2005
This is getting better and better. The on-top position moment was just amazing it had me drooling.
Kepp up the good work and update soon. Please!
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From ANON - Nika on April 06, 2005
Finally a update. But a great update. Can i sense a little bit of jealously coming from Tyson?
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From ANON - FANGURL309 on March 31, 2005
GOD DAMMIT I CANT TAKE IT NO MORE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UP DATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UP DATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE, ONE MORE THING, UPDATE.
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