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Reviews for Telemarketer

By : cueball2
  • From Kate09190 on March 22, 2009
    How exciting.

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  • From ANON - Dream Wyvern on August 24, 2005
    I thought that was a very original idea, the work-out equipment thing, really!
    Though who knows, I haven't read many DBZ fics.. but I may start. ( :
    Adorable, the "my boyfriend" at the end, lol.
    I always think it's awesome when a man takes on the challenge of writing a yaoi.. the different perspective is something a woman can never harness very well.
    Keep writing and I can't imagine you'll get anything but better.
    -DeeDubya a.k.a. Jaxxy.
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  • From Hellagoddess on August 07, 2005
    lmao! this is really good for your first PWP! Made me laugh, which is a good sign! I really liked vegeta's abruptness - spot on!
    Where did you get the idea for the equipment?! and is it actually supposed to be used for what they used it for?! *grin*

    Great work!

    Hellagoddess
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  • From ANON - Alastair (not logged in) on June 22, 2005
    XP Gah! Cute!

    A little short with lemons, but definitely a cute ending.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 29, 2005
    its ok
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 18, 2005
    *grins* That was so funny. And extremely different. I like it! But it was quite an odd machine...
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on March 13, 2005
    Hehe, the machine provided Vegeta with training and fucking... then little Kaka-chan, not wanting to be anty less than this new plastic competitor, ALSO started providing even BETTER training and fucking... which resulted in "By bye machine..."

    *Little Kaka-chan grabs useless idiotic machine and blasts it to pieces*

    Little Kaka-chan: Veggie won't be requering your services any longer cause now "I" am around!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2005
    LOL! i absolutwly loved the ending of this! =D its awesome. keep it up!
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  • From Ellen on March 12, 2005
    ROTFLOL

    Oh my goodness that was great!
    Thanks for sharing
    *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on March 11, 2005
    Kinky, cute, and comedic. It's hard to type now because I keep giggling like an idiot. Great job.

    ~Yuurei~
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on March 11, 2005
    wow that was kinky and to think it all start with a telemarketer and they say telemarketer are bad.
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on March 11, 2005
    *laughs hysterically* Pretty good for your first PWP!!!! ^^ I demand more!!!!
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  • From ANON - lordofthepies on March 11, 2005
    I loved the end punchline for this! Hahaha, thats even better than my treatment of telemarketers.
    Nice PWP too, original. (I haven't seen many machine ones, much less G/V ones)
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  • From ANON - Macha on March 11, 2005
    AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh. Kinky! Settled into my perverted mind very well, thank you very much!

    Only one thing to suggest, your tenses changed quite often. *shrugs* but not enough to distract me from reading it.

    And I was Soooo certain that Goku had been the telemarketer. Ah well.
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