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By : janaleigh
  • From ANON - Cardinal on May 18, 2005
    WWWHHHAATTT?!
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  • From ANON - Macha on May 18, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


    Um... as for the rest of the chapter. I feel so bad for Goku and Vegeta, with Vegeta making the decisioni to keep his distance.

    I do like the fact the sayians now have projects going on that are going to unite them as a people, but keep them independant as a nation.

    Great chapter, but you had better update soon. That was just the most evil cliff hanger ever.
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on May 18, 2005
    O.O

    *goes insane* What the???? Mehehfklnhkxsc!mhkdfcvhn!!!! *dies*
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2005
    Great story I cant wait to see how it pans out, up date soon!!! please!!!
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on May 05, 2005
    I didn't know you'd updated!!!! How sad!!! Full of action and angst... poor Vegeta...losing your dreams and wants is a terrible thing...
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  • From Kugatsu on April 24, 2005
    Wow, that was great...Man you gotta continue that was a great fight now just --descriptive the tension the rage, everything!

    Please, continue!
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  • From ANON - Cardinal on April 23, 2005
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I have never read a story so good!! You depict Vegeta
    and Goku's personalities so perfectly that I feel as if it truly happened on the
    show! LOL! Great job! Please udpate soon!!

    ~Cardinal
    Author of "Come With Me"

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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 23, 2005
    Wow! That was an awesome confrontation.

    Vegeta has some serious thinking to do.

    Great Job! Keep it up.

    ~Webtester01~
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 23, 2005
    wow great fight scene i loved it.
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  • From Diabolus on April 17, 2005
    Great update! It's really sad though :( poor Goku! I hope you update soon. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 16, 2005
    another great chapter i can't wait to see where you take the next chapter especially since vegeta is ready to take over by force.
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  • From ANON - Cardinal on April 16, 2005
    AAHH! LOL You have to update soon soon soon!! NOw nOW NOW!
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  • From Diabolus on April 14, 2005
    This fic is beautiful. I really loved this, the way it was written and its plot. You have a wonderful style of writing and an amazing imagination to make such a good and in depth plot like this.

    I must commend you on how you made all of the Saiyan clans and the whole idea behind another version of the planet; the Kakarotto was a good idea too.

    Your sex scenes were also very beautiful. The only disappointment I had was the fact neither of them said that they loved eachother :( I was waiting for it but it never came! Maybe this isn't finished yet? I hope you continue this if you were planning to, as it's fantastic and can develop even further into a great story. I am adding this straight to my recommended reading!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 12, 2005
    another great chapter i love the lemon it was kinky as always and i loved the beat down that kakarott took.
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  • From Kugatsu on April 11, 2005
    OMG NOOO!!! YOU CAN'T CUT ME OFF LIKE THAT! *DIES*
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