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Reviews for Silent Tears

By : DarkFangs

From ANON - Melfina Shinta on July 03, 2005
Mel: Dark, you really are being slow XD. Mei: Not as slow as someone I know *stares* Mel: -_-;;; so sue me... Mei: FINE!!!! Mel: O.o...well anyway, nicely done! Although, it was depressing reading about Iris's torture T-T. Mei: And to think I thought YOU were bad enough, now we have Dark's torture to deal with. Mel: ANYWAYS!!! I'm reviewing- Mei: Eh-hem... Mel: -_-;;;; WE'RE reviewing to make you happy and give you support and UPDATE MORE!!!! X333. Even though I've already read this, I'm having a blast reading it again since I get to reread funny scenes and learn from you!!!!!!!! Mei: OH! Hint hint: we might be planning on taking out our fic on mediaminers and redoing it, since Mel over here screwed up and made it all depressing XPPP Mel: So sue me for not thinking more >< Mei: Fine I will! Mel: O.O...Well, update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Even though I can just read the next chapter, update anyway so I don't have to wait for that new update when I get there! Mei: YAH!!!!!!!!!! XD
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From ANON - Melfina Shinta on July 01, 2005
Mel: you know it kinda ruins everything when you already read something and read it again -_-;;;. Mei: Very true...But anyway, that was an awesome chappie none the less!!! X3. Mel: THAT WAS MY LINE!! -_-;;; u always steal my lines... Mei: XP Mel: Anyway's! I can definatly tell that you improved it, it t'was very good! Mei: Very! Mel: STOP DOING THAT!!!! -_-(anime mad mark) Well, anyway keep up the good work!! Mei: Keep up the good work!! Mel: -_-;;; ... Mei: XD Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Melfina Shinta on June 28, 2005
Mel: I finally have the time to read ur fic again!! Mei: But not yours. Mel: -.-...shut up I'm having complications! Anyway, awesome chapter! I like the way ur adding this small poem-like lines into it. It makes Iris's emotions and words a little more fun to read! Mei: Very! Chapter four now completed! Now just gotta finish a lot more chapters still, but that is a good thing! Mel: Keep up the good revising work and update some more so that I don't go "thats all?" at the last chapter XD. Mel/Mei: Good job and good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From on June 23, 2005
But... was that as "joyful" as the night was gonna get. ;p
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From on June 23, 2005
awwwwww ^_^ hehe this was soooooo cute!!!!!
keep it up!
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From on May 23, 2005
"joyful night" eh? :P

Aww bless tala-kun!!! getting so worked up about the girl. that was soooooooo cute ;p
Still lubbing this, just wish you wouldnt take so long to update ;p

Oh yea, what was said in the song?
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From ANON - Melfina Shinta on May 20, 2005
X333, very nice!! It was so good!! This is why I need to learn from you... Mei: Like A LOT of things... Mel: XP Shud up!! Not my fault that I wasn't a good writer and never really paying attention in Language Arts class till this year...>.> Mei: Right...Well anyway, G-R-E-A-T job on the fic, it was much much better!! Mel: Hey I was gonna say that!!! Plus to add to that I finally had the time to read chapter three!! Yeah! Now need to start chapter four! Mei: And chapter two. Mel: ???? Mei: Of ur fic... Mel: Oh right that...well...yeah...um...BYE~! And good job on chapter three!!!! Mei: -_-;;;;
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From ANON - Anon on May 11, 2005
update
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From ANON - Melfina Shinta on May 08, 2005
Mel: I finally made the time to read your fic!!! HURRAY!!!!!!!! Mei: But you didn't make the time to write UR fic. Mel: Shut up!!! I still have a project to finish!!! Then I'll be free from school's grasp for a VERY short while T-T. Mei: Ur just being lazy! Mel: NO I AM NOT!!!! Well anyway, chapter two was very nice, but I did see a few grammer errors, but besides that nothing wrong. It was SOOO elaborate and detailed especially when you describe the battles and the sunset. Mei: Sunset was pwitty (pretty)!!!!!! And and and it's really funny too! Mel: I agree with Mei there, so keep up the good work!!! On to next chapter!!! Hopefully I can finish it...
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From ANON - Melfina Shinta on April 28, 2005
Mel: You did better this time, I really like it! Mei: Me too! Mel: Stop appearing out of nowhere! Mei: Well I want to review too! Mel: Too bad, this is MY computer. So I get to do what I want to do! XP Mei: Grrr...XPPPPPPP Mel: Well sorry for the RUDE interruption there. Mei: I was not being rude, I was being nice enough to comment! Mel: *ties Mei up in a closet somewhere* well anyway, I really like it so far. I hope you do this well later too, well anyway ON WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!
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From on April 28, 2005
Awww no! >.< mean DD >.< MUSNT HURT KAI! BIG NO NO :p
lol
still going good^_^

and AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW tala!!! kissed the girl!!! so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How come mariah battled a duo twice?
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From ANON - kaisgirl112 on April 26, 2005
i like this fic but u keep putting it on new chapter but there isnt its reli frustrating!!

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From ANON - LadyHiwatari on April 15, 2005
NYA!! aww bless Tala-kun >.< squeee!!!!! so kawaii he is ^_^ ;p
liked very much... although its kinna.... long... reading the scottish accent... but still, thats goods a good add in ^_^
hope you can get the next one out sooner ^_^
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From on April 04, 2005
NYA!!!! ^_^
loved this ^_^ cant wait for the next chapter...
poor iris *sniffle*...lucky also...getting kai ;p
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From Queen13 on April 03, 2005
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