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By : debbiechan
  • From ANON - makota on August 06, 2005
    Yay! You updated.

    Such a good chapter too. I have to give you a golden kudos for keeping Bulma strong. How many fics are out there with her pining over Vegeta? I like your take on her a hellva lot more, plus I think it's much much more realisitic.


    Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - moonlight shadow on August 06, 2005
    this is so good!!! once again i am sorry for the lateness of my review!!! ^^;;
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  • From ANON - duckie on July 30, 2005
    I love this story! I read all twenty seven chapters in one sitting, go me! I love the way you write, it is so fluid and pleasant to read. I don't usually like it when it's cluttered with words,but yours just FLOWS. Vegeta and Bulma are SOO in character! I don't really think of this as a story of what MIGHT have happened in the three years, as far as I'm concerened, this IS what happened. Keep writing beautifully, I love your work!!!
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  • From ANON - makota2112 on July 28, 2005
    Girl, I'm on the edge of my seat! arg, wish I could type more but I'm all ready late for work! Great job!
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  • From ANON - Media on July 23, 2005
    I like your story very much. Actually its one of the best I read so far altough Bulma is a bit sex oriented for my taste. Vegeta's characterization is excellent. Please update. (sorry if my spelling isnt perfect. my english is kind of rusty) Media
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  • From ANON - hopeless_angel1605 on July 21, 2005
    wow this is great please write more soon
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  • From ANON - bob on July 20, 2005
    aww they're not back together yet but please continue i've been waiting for this update!!
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  • From ANON - moonlight shadow on July 16, 2005
    omg!! this is great!!! please continue!!! ^^;; sorry about the latness in all my reviews my computer as been down *ack*ack*
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  • From ANON - tempest rojata on July 16, 2005
    That was wonderful. I love how Bulma told that nurse off! That was great! Hehe, can't wait to see how Vegeta will react to his son once he gets a good look at that hair!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 14, 2005
    aw man when are vegeta and bulma gonna get back together it's killing me!!
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on July 13, 2005
    Poor Vegeta - he never seems to be able to get his balance. Everything seems to bewilder and confuse him, and he apparently lacks social skills. I've always thought his anger and impatience is directed more at himself than others. Am I a bad person for saying I don't like Bulma? She wasn't my favorite person on the show and you are true to that character - but man, she was a bitch. :D I think that's why Vegeta is so good with her - he won't take her crap. Poor Yamcha - just a convenience. *snicker* Update or die! UR GR8 :P
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  • From ANON - LadyRrain on July 08, 2005
    Wow!! Wonderful story! I like that fact that it hold to the series so well.
    I'm wondering how the next chap will turn out. Oh please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - makota on June 25, 2005
    Ack! You're taking a break? nooooo!!!

    *sigh*

    Oh well, can't say I blame you but I'll be waiting with baited breath. Damn! I hate cliff hangers!

    Great chapter as always, but I can't wait to see Vegeta's reaction (if there is one at all) once he finds out who the papa really is.

    Kudos :)
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  • From ANON - Tempest Rojata on June 21, 2005
    Brilliant has always. Although I'm feeling a little.... empty.... I need MORE!!!!! I hope your update comes soon, I want to know whats going to happen next. Hows the birth going? Wheres Vegeta? How is he going to react? Ahhhh!! So many questions left unanswered!
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  • From ANON - bob on June 21, 2005
    I luv the fic but when is Vegeta coming back? Update soon I'm waiting!

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