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By : debbiechan
  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on May 13, 2005
    I really feel bad for poor Yammie. It was bad enough that Bulma dumped him, it had to look like the worst type of betrayal for her to go to Vegeta. No matter what, this was the enemy, and few have Goku's ability to forgive.

    I like how you have Vegeta running away from everything - or at least unwilling to face and accept anything but pain. That is what he knows and what he has the experience to deal with. These other emotions are too unfamiliar for him to be able to cope with them.
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  • From ANON - makota on May 12, 2005
    Ahhh! A cliffy indeed. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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  • From ANON - LadyWater on May 11, 2005
    As I expected from you, another perfect chap. I can't wait for you to up-date again!
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  • From ANON - LadyWater on May 09, 2005
    As usual a great chap! I love this story and your stlye. Up-date soon.
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  • From ANON - LadyWater on May 04, 2005
    I love this story! Your character's are true to the anime and I have read a lot of the 3 years fics, but your's is the best! Up-date soon.
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  • From Pixelgoddess on May 03, 2005
    A cliffie! Debbiechan wrote a cliffie! I actually feel really bad for Yamcha here. He is a nice guy who doesn't deserve to be thrown away like that. Bulma is still a self-centered wench - she obviously knows her power over Vegeta and is more than willing to use it. Vegeta seems to be enjoying this new-found entertainment, but does he know or understand the power he has over her as well?
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  • From Pixelgoddess on April 29, 2005
    Such a nice little slice of life. For some reason, I really liked Bulma letting go of the balloon - it gave such a nice 'oh shit' touch. Also liked the image of Vegeta the boa constrictor - he does seem like the type to gorge himself, doesn't he? Bulma and her mother seem so comfortable together.

    I didn't like this line, though - She was staring at the clearing where she and Vegeta had gotten it on for the first time. Gotten it on? Yamcha or Krillin might think that, but I can't see that coming from Bulma. Had sex, yes - wishing it was love, maybe.

    Can't wait to see how Bulma tries to draw Vegeta out and his reaction. She seems so bewildered, which is making her more manipulative in her attempts to understand Vegeta.
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  • From ANON - makota on April 29, 2005
    Oh I just caught up on all the wonderful chappies while I was gone! It's brilliant!

    well that's it for my break, and what a wonderful break it was! best get back to work.


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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on April 25, 2005
    God I love your writing! All of your stories are sooo good! :) I consider you one of the top DBZ writers, at least as far as Veggie is concerned. :) He's such a fantastic character to write about...and sooo bad. :D I'll look for future pieces from you too.
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  • From ANON - LadyWater2010 on April 25, 2005
    Great chap. I love your charactions and I think that he would feel that way. up-date soon.
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  • From ANON - xvaltheavx on April 24, 2005
    Heyla,
    Just wanted to drop a note and let you know how absolutely /incredible/ your story is.
    You are an amazing writer, I really admire your style, and your the only one I've found so far who really keeps Vegeta in character.
    This story is beautifully done, and bless you for updating so often! ^_~

    ~Althea~
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  • From ANON - velika on April 21, 2005
    OO nice so far, you gotta finish it, Please
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  • From ANON - Moonlight Shadow on April 20, 2005
    very good i cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Vegeta\'s Mate on April 16, 2005
    I love you for writing this fic; it's sweet without being over done, small measures of angst against a back drop of firey passion. I bow at your feet. You are truely one of the most talented authors I've read in a long time.


    Love ya!

    Vegeta's Mate
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  • From ANON - Vegeta\'s Mate on April 16, 2005
    Waaaaahhhhhh!!!!!! Chapters 8 & 9 are the same! Great fic, but please fix the last chapter! ~nibbles on her fingernails~ I'm dying to know what happens!

    Love ya!

    Vegeta's Mate
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