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Reviews for Always A First Time

By : debbiechan
  • From ANON - Quaxo on April 16, 2005
    Sorry, but ch.8 and 9 are exactly the same! Wai!!! Don't keep me waiting on such a glorious fanfic!
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  • From ANON - Macha on April 12, 2005
    My favorite paragraph was the one when Bulma was thinking about waiting to happen to her. She was an inventor, she made things happen. Very insightful.
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  • From ANON - makota on April 10, 2005
    Poor Yamcha. I almost feel sorry for him, almost.

    Jeeeze, where are all of the reviews for this work? This is one of the better B/V's I've seen.

    Anywho, I want to say how much I like the quoting at the begining of each of your chapters from DBZ. I think it adds some 'realness' if that makes any sense.

    Looking forward to the next update. :)
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  • From ANON - west dean on April 10, 2005
    This is excellent B/V!
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  • From ANON - Makota on April 06, 2005
    Whew! That was hot.

    I love the detail and Bulma's bravery. Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Makota on March 31, 2005
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I LOVE the characterization. You have Bulma and Vegeta down pat. This is one of the more believable portrayals of 'how did they get together?' that I have ever seen. And that's saying something! Great work.
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  • From ANON - Makota on March 30, 2005
    I love this story! Very well written and great characerization....of course I'm not surprised, I've never come across any of your fics that I didn't like! Keep up the great work and I'll keep reading!
    Kudos!
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  • From ANON - Eiya on March 29, 2005
    Well written and I like the length of the chapters
    when's the next one?
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  • From ANON - LadyWater2010 on March 25, 2005
    Very good. Your write well and I think that you hold close to the characters thougths and feelings. Up-date soon.
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  • From ANON - Veggie\'s Slave on March 25, 2005
    Loving the story so far. The section with Yamcha's perspective was a nice touch, all that about only being human really gave you a feel for the frustration he must feel sometimes. I liked that you portrayed his feelings for Bulma, it pisses me off when people write him as a heartless player when he must have felt something for her. And I loved the way you described Vegeta's feelings of apathy and emptiness since Frieza's death and his constant paranoia and suspicion of Bulma when she spoke to him. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Veggie\'s Slave on March 19, 2005
    I'm so glad you've finally posted another fic on this site. I love your stories, you truly stick to the nature of the characters more than anyone else. I've enjoyed this fic so far and can't wait to read more. Please continue to write! =)
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