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Reviews for Coda

By : LisaB
  • From ANON - Kia on October 31, 2005
    Ooo.. a lovely piece. I like the maturity and grayness of the emotions here -- Kakarrot isn't a dolt and Vegeta isn't an insensitive asshole. The pace was good and the scene changes natural.
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  • From ANON - chibi_vegeta on October 08, 2005


    I don't know what to say at the moment, except that I am moved and impressed, and glad to see another writer of your caliber. thank you for this.


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  • From ANON - Xero Sky on October 08, 2005
    I absolutely adored this! Angst, love, sex, drama, romance...

    SO GOOD.
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  • From ANON - tokageMusume on October 08, 2005
    I really enjoyed your story! It's a wonderful piece of work. I've never read any DBZ fanfiction primarily because the series just seemed a little childlike to me; nothing juvenile about your characters. I saw your work recommended in LJ by a writer I respect so I visited. I'm so glad I did. What I liked best in this piece is the love Goku has for Vegeta that he can't bear to name; it runs all through the work and is beautifully understated. So very like a warrior to become comfortable with the exertions of sex well before they give in to love. Thanks for much for publishing this! -- tM
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  • From ANON - Macha on April 01, 2005
    It's a damn good thing you had A/N stating there was going to be a chapter 2 to this. Because, right before I got to that A/N I was thinking, "Nnnnoooooooooooo!!!!!!! It can't end like THAT,/b.

    Thank you for the tear jerker warning. I think that was the only thing that stopped me from pulling out the tissues.

    Very good chatper. Hope to see more REAL soon.
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  • From ANON - FireFly on March 31, 2005
    That fic was truely beautiful. Had me tearing up, and I don't do that often. I think you portrayed everyone perfectly... and really I can't put words together in the way you can. So I'll just say this. It was great. Loved it. Look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Zack, the Sayajin on March 22, 2005
    Oh, I just love the way your Kaks thinks... "Kaks thinks" "giggles" A-ny-way, it seems to me that there is a Jeo-something to dump and a Vegeta to retrieve. I hope Goku give him a hard time for it... In many ways... XD
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on March 22, 2005
    Wow! That was really great.

    I hope that he can forgive Vegeta and deliver the letter.
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