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By : Camaro
  • From ANON - Krya on November 03, 2005
    i rather like your story, and i'm looking forward to seeing how this ends.
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  • From ANON - saiyanluver on November 03, 2005
    That doesn't mean no one else liked it. It just means some were too lazy to review. This chapter was good too. A little short, but good. I must admit, I wanted to stop reading when I saw the way you portrayed Trunks, but it's turning out to be better than I thought. I'm glad I read it through.
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  • From ANON - sarah on November 03, 2005
    i like this story very much and am intrigued by every character twist. please continue.
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  • From ANON - rena sama on November 03, 2005
    It's amazing how drastically you can change the mood of the fic but have it flow together so seamlessly. It went from being rauchously sexual to unbearable sadness in a heartbeat. I feel quite sad now. not pity for the girl, just sad that things like that really do happen. And while I suppose Trunks could easily seen the whole senario as an example of hate instead of love, it seems like he's really understanding. I was wondering how you planned to get a "heartless" person to feel. This example you chose was rather unexpected, but so is the rest of the fic. Always keeping us guessing!

    To make a long story short, it's fabulous.

    P.S. just dying to know what's going to happen now that Gohan's back in the picture.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 03, 2005
    As usual, wonderfully written!

    The way you described the Trunks' thoughts and the appearance of the hospitalized girl... wow.

    You have a real talent. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Vicky on October 31, 2005
    breath taking, absolutely beautiful. it brought a tear to my eye. i love this chapter.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on October 30, 2005
    Well written.

    So the monster has feelings after all. I hope Marai wins.
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  • From ANON - Macha on October 30, 2005
    As usual, this chapter is very thought provoking. (sorry about my spelling) That was a very tough lesson plan Mirai had for Trunks this time. I wasn't expecting it either, really, for some reason I thought for certain Mirai was going to try to show Trunks some lovey-dovey couple. (And that certainly would have failed.) I am glad Mirai is smarter than that. And I am glad Susan's story was able to move Trunks, even if it was just a tad bit, and certainly against his will.

    Excellent job as usual. Glad to see you are back.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2005
    Sheesh again with the cliff hanger torture when are you going to give us more? I am not sure wheter I want Mirai to succeed or fail.
    Poor Goten he still obviously loves Trunks but knows that Trunks no longer wants him. Heck they barely seem to still be friends this is not good. But then again more please!!!

    Nutsy the one and only
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  • From Shateera on July 18, 2005
    It's been a while since I've reviewed ya, huh?

    This story scares me and opens my eyes at the same time. It scares me because I have to face facts and realize that the world is cold and harsh and I have to deal with the fact that love isn't always what a person thinks it is...nor is it always enough.

    And I may be off at what you're getting at with this story but I am learning something and I am growing from this fic. I'm learning of self-love, no matter what flaws I have. Before, I thought differently and I didn't want to accept myself as I am; I thought I needed someone to complete me and make me at home with myself...

    Trunks is liberal while Mirai seems to be more converservative but desirable. Maybe Trunks want to fuck the more innocent version of himself for more than the glory. Anyways, great job (though I KNOW I'll have to re-read this at least five times before I can get a clearer grasp of it) You know how to bind people, girl.

    Love ya,
    Shay
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 02, 2005
    I don't know how in the heck I missed this update, but I obviously did.

    Hmmmm, I wonder what the gadget Bulma is missing is and does. That would probably be a good start as to who took it.

    I thought for a moment, "This is it," Miria was going to give in. I have to say, that young man has a whole lot more fortitude than I do.

    Yep, Goten is certainly a touchy subject.

    O.o Now there is an interesting challange. I hope Miria can pull it off, but I have a feeling Trunks is going to gain-say anything he comes up with.


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  • From ANON - no name for now on July 02, 2005
    O_O Damnnn.

    Jesus Christ. Goddamn. Wow, just...wow. I think that this is the best Trunks/Goten story I've ever read in my life. It's wicked and dark as hell and that's how I love them. The big surprise for me was the Goku thing on the graveyard. Brilliant. Fucked up and so evil that I nearly cried for Goku (loved the mentionned . G/V) Now, I know I worship a lot of fanfictions writers but I think you made it in the God/Goddess category and you're the one one in it. You need to write more stories. Sorry for all the ass-kissing and worshipping but it kicked ass and I'm reviewing for 12 chapters so... Keep updating and I'll I keep reviewing.

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  • From ANON - BballAnimeLover89 on July 01, 2005
    MIRAI BETTER WIN DAMNIT!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 01, 2005
    Interesting fic. Keep it up
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  • From ANON - Rayne on June 30, 2005
    This story is developing so nicely! And Trunks is such an interesting character, the present and future Trunks. Even though they're the same person, it's still so obvious that they're not the same. And you're picking them both apart at a nice pace. *grin* I can't wait to see what else you reveal about these two. I can't wait for more chapters!
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