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By : Camaro
  • From ANON - you know who on June 28, 2005
    god damn you, update already..only to the 11th chapter after god who knows how long this story first started?
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  • From chayron on June 23, 2005
    Ah, such indignity, Trunks. Such desire for control. To intimidate your own father must be a damn great occupation. Especially when, despite being much stronger than you, your father can hardly resist your self-confident knowledge of your sexiness and incestuous suggestions. It’s an art to get people so entangled that they hardly can remember their resolutions and standpoints. You like to shock, Trunks. You like to see people’s wide eyes and their mouth open in disbelief at your blunt words and actions.
    I just wonder – how big is the difference between you and Mirai? How far are you going to push him? How far will you go trying to get your narcissism satisfied? Far. I can bet you’ll go far. Yes, you know too that Mirai is a bit too naďve. That’s your chance, Trunks. Play the oncoming game right. Oh, but you do know how to play, you do know how to shift the game that it would fit your own rules. Yes, you’ll go far. I wonder if you’ll ever return.

    The story is brilliant. I could feel a thrill of challenge while reading. Your thoughts and philosophy stand out and are dark, of course, that’s what is keeping us all reading your works – something different, something making us think. Well, maybe I should talk only for myself. Something making ME think. And that’s a greatest gift a person can give to another person. Thanks.

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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on June 18, 2005
    Trunks and Vegeta, the idea alone is disgusting.

    But I'm still curious as to why he does it.
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  • From Agent182 on June 17, 2005
    Great chapter! Took me long enough to read it -_- but i got to it! Now onto what i loved. This was one of my favorite lines:
    [“Do you still love Trunks?” He whispered, wondering if Goten was too far into sleep to hear him.

    “Well that’s a stupid question,” Goten yawned, surprising him. “Like Vegeta and my father, death itself wouldn’t sever it. I’ll probably love Trunks until forever burns to cinders.”]
    I loved it. The whole chapter was magnificent. I loved how you described Bulma and how she stunk of death. Very good. Great chapter all together. I missed seeing updates from you. Don't leave us hanging.

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  • From ANON - Rayne on June 05, 2005
    Wow, geez man...Trunks is like...dude. ^^;;; I don't know what to say. Great chapter, and I can't wait for more! I'd like to see some more interaction with Mirai and Trunks (of course, you know, because I love Mirai and anyone he's around at the moment). *grin* And I feel like something big is going to happen sometime before this is over. Anyway, whatever goes down, I'm sure it will be great!
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 04, 2005
    Ah, it's been a long time since this story has been updated. I'll tell you I still think Trunks is an asshole. :) Certainly keeping him in character for this story. *nods*

    Goten had many enlightening things to say about his father and Vegeta. It's making me more and more curious.

    Hopefully Mirai will get around to finding Gohan and having... words... with him.
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  • From ANON - Nutsy and Dark Pearl on May 17, 2005
    Okay now you are torturing us! We're not asking details on the sex, but we are dying to know things! Such as does Goten still love trunks even though trunks no longer seems capable of caring? Will Other trunks save his younger self? Will those two actually have sex? Is that a form of masterbatution or what? Techniqually they are the same person but they are also two seperate people...
    What scars and destruction has Trunks left in his wake? Why does he do this? Does he care that he does? Come on! Give us more!!!!

    Nutsy and Dark Pearl
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2005
    LUV YOUR STORY HOPE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR STORYS
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  • From ANON - LaRieaux on May 01, 2005
    Good chapter but it wasnt long enough. I think I was done with it in about 5 mins at the most (and still craving more). But anywho, yeah great chapter and I definitely cannot wait for the next.
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on April 30, 2005
    Ewww... Really, what IS IT with them? Don't they have any control? Or has Trunks discovered a way to entice saiyajins to madness. If so, how was Goten sheltered against it?

    Double ewwww... I hope we get a good explanation on Goku and Gohan's behavior.
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  • From ANON - Macha on April 28, 2005
    Yep, I still want to know how it changed from Trunks's death sentense to sex. *shrugs* Goten may very well have calculated all of Trunks's reasonning, but from what I actually read about Gohan's behavior... well, Trunks must of pulled something fance pretty fast.

    I wonder if Goku was trying to divert Trunks attention away from his eldest, or if the 'shit' was because he should have seen something like this coming.

    Thank you for updating!!! Still want to see a Gohan's POV on this though.
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  • From ANON - Rayne on April 28, 2005
    Wow. That's really all I can say. I don't have any words of wisdom or a long drawn out review about everything that happened, but I really hope that you write the next chapter very, very soon. I'm on the EDGE OF MY SEAT waiting for the next part!
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  • From ANON - Shateera on April 28, 2005
    My God, what can I say? This fic has truly gripped me...I think, for the first time ever, I have slowed down to try and grasp every word written in this story just so I could better understand everything going on. It's sent me on an emotional whirlwind, in some points, the truth this story speaks about the way things in this world are, a part of me just wanted to close my eyes and escape how cold things are, but an even stronger part of me knew closing my eyes wouldn't make the reality any less real, the world any less cold, or the intensity any less. This...is truly a fucked up work of art. The manipulation and anger and hatred and jealousy and envy is so powerful and compelling. Soul binding. This... has genuinely touched my heart and helped me grow. A part of me wanted to cry, before I even read the story, just hearing about it...and I knew it'd be great..It blew my mind. Trunks, as he should have been continued on Gt. As, in my opinion, he was meant to be. In DBZ, you could tell there was something fucked up inside of him..and you captured that. But I'm not through, and I *am* going to continue reading this story. I love it. And there is a lot more that can be said about this story but nowhere nearly enough to capture how brilliant the experience of reading it is.

    Love,
    Shay
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  • From ANON - Agent182 on April 28, 2005
    ... Gohan was pissed that Goku had sex with Trunks... so he goes and does it. *shakes head* he has the nerve... asshole. Very good chapter. Made me want to break Gohan into pieces but hey you got emotions out of me. hehe great chapter as always. What is with Macha saying i threatened you? *raises eyebrow then laughs* UPDATE SOON or... uh.. else?
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  • From ANON - WEbtester01 on April 28, 2005
    More please!

    I wonder how Gohan reacted to what he did after the fight.

    *waits for next chapter*
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