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  • From ANON - BEELA on April 11, 2005
    PLEASE ADD GOHAN IN TO THIS
    THRESOMES ARE GOOD

    BELLA
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  • From ANON - LaRieaux on April 11, 2005
    Well...I must say that this is some of the best shit I've read in a long time! The way you portray the emotions in this story is phonomenal...I'm impressed. Good job! I await the next chapter impatiently....
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  • From ANON - Macha on April 11, 2005
    *grins* Titus and Aries huh? *winks* hahahahahahahahah.... *clears throat*

    Anyway, I still have to say that I think Miria made a HUGE mistake by going to the club with Trunks. I am very happy he was able to resist, but still, I don't think he should put himself in positions that make him have to choose. Way too dangerous.

    Poor Trunks *sighs sadly* I really do want to know what happend to him to make the decisions he has. Even Vegeta isn't that narotic. (sp?)

    I did like Miria's reaction to Red's attention. *grins* I knew he'd like that kind of attention.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 11, 2005
    Wow. Marai has quite a challenge. Trunks probably won't care untill Marai leaves for his own timeline.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Rayne on April 11, 2005
    Oooohhh!! The tension between these two is just....!!!!!!! SQUEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! I live for fics like this! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Agent182 on April 11, 2005
    Great chapter. this chapter actually reminded me of a song. hehe -_- lame yeah.
    I feel badly for Mirai, I just don't think Trunks will change.... maybe if he does experience love such as falling in love with Mirai or something he might change. Of course, he'd had to let himself fall in love and that will be hard because of the fact he doesn't believe in love. I love everyone's shocked faces when they see both of them. hehe it's the this is Mirai then Red basically said hey let's fuck. hehe Very rad chapter as always. I guess Macha's review got to you. She beat me to it too... next time thou.. she won't BUHAAHA anyways, wonderful chapter and i hope to see an update soon
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  • From ANON - Macha on April 10, 2005
    Please update soon. Do you know how terrible it looks for a person 30+ yr. to be on the floor throwing a tantrum, kicking and screaming?

    Of course, now if you are really sadistic, you won't update because of the halarious mental image I have just given you. :)
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  • From ANON - Kimbrafire on April 10, 2005
    I'm enjoying this alot. I'm gonna have to check everyday to see if you updated this or not. M. Trunks is my favorite character out of everyone. I'm glad that he and Chibi will get 'along' well together. Will you get Mirai to train with Vegeta? Just so Chibi can see him half-naked and sweating. lol VERY nice image though. I hope to be able to read more soon though. It's really too good to stop now. =^-^=
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  • From ANON - FW on April 06, 2005
    Oh fabulous! I'm so in love with this story, it's just so... so... Evil! Evil, great, intriguing, excellten story idea, all that good stuff, I can NOT WAIT for the next chapter, Christ this is the best thing I've read in ages, so looking forward to your next chapter. I wonder if it's really something wrong with Trunks' brain that makes him act the way he does, and if so, what caused it? A spar with his father perhaps? Mental Trauma? Can't wait to find out!
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  • From ANON - Todesengel on April 05, 2005
    Sorry JayFic, but I avoid Japnese at all cost. Just not my thing. Thanks though!


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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on April 05, 2005
    Urgh, so much self love it makes me puke... O_o

    One thing, it would have been better if they had both called each other "Trunks"... And then Present Trunks can start calling Mirai "Trunksie-po", "Tru-chan", or definitely Trunks-koi (koi means "sweetheart" in japanese)... And phrases like "Hey there, Sexy", or "Oh, babe... can't wait to find out if *I* scream when I come in multiple orgasms" (he's always been seme so he wants to know what he would do if he were uke?)...

    Hehe, those are fun. ^_-
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  • From PrincessKoriandr on April 05, 2005
    Yes! Awesome, wasn't expecting that. "Change and you can have me?" Ohhhhhhhhhh not Trunks is going to have to really work now, no more "easy greasy." I hope he puts that little snob through hell and back. ~Kenya
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  • From ANON - Rayne on April 04, 2005
    On the edge of my seat here! I wish I had more to say, but I can't think of anything. Just know that I'm really, REALLY intrigued, especially by Mirai's proposal. *grin*
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 04, 2005
    Finally Trunks is gettinga tase of his own medine.

    Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Agent182 on April 04, 2005
    Ah yes, an update. I guess I persuaded you... ^_~ right...
    Really great chapter, I will at times it was hard to see who exactly was talking, Mirai or Trunks, but I could guess. That was the only thing that would be mildly wrong and it could just be me... *hear echo* ohkay so it is just me. I find myself laughing and smirking after everything Trunks says. Especially this line: “If you fuck yourself, is that considered masturbation?” it has to be my favorite. I was laughing so hard and I was like wait... is it? Hehe and now... Mirai will give Trunks what he's always wanted... himself. I just wonder if Trunks would go through with it... he said he gets what he wants and when he wants it- why go through the trouble when he CAN get it WHEN he wants it. Mirai obviously doesn't know what he's getting himself into...
    By the way, I am glad you don't have very long chapters; I find it hard to keep up with fics with really long chapters so thanks. And I expect to see an update soon ^_~ good luck

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