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By : Camaro
  • From ANON - Macha on April 04, 2005
    HOLY!!!.... Miria is playing with FIRE. The scary part is, I don't think he cares whether or not he gets burned.

    I would have stayed in a public place. Safer. lol, of course, even if I were Miria, I would have liked the attention being with my twin image would have gathered. :) (hehe, evil)

    AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh. He can't seriously believe after a promise like that that Trunks will actually change.

    How is he going to know if his younger perverted self ever did change? And Trunks is going to have to find a way to prove he does/did.

    O.o Did I read the right? Vegeta either gave in at some point, or Trunks made an opportunity happen? -_-


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  • From ANON - Agent182 on April 04, 2005
    It's been almost a week since this has been updated. *is shocked* a week!! I don't know how much longer i can wait... Update soon.... pwease!?
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  • From ANON - Princess Koriand\'r on April 02, 2005
    OH MY GOD!! You have GOT to UPDATE this and SOON! I'm so impressed. I thought I had read them all, but this is on of the most original ideas to come out of fanfiction in a long time! [not the Trunks sleeping with himself - that's been done to death, but his motives and actions] Just to think, Trunks acting like a sexual predator. That not even Vegeta is safe from him. I can understand why his giving his son a wide berth. And now it goes from bad to worse when his future self pops up. I can honestly say that I can't wait for the next chapter! Please, update soon. I'll bake you cookies! ~Kenya
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  • From ANON - Sliding_pool on March 30, 2005
    Damn!!!! This is really intersting so far! But your style does seem really familiar to me and I dont know where from. Any hints or are you a new author around here? I hope you'll keep posting one way or another! WOW!


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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on March 30, 2005
    Curiouser and curiouser.

    More, please.
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  • From ANON - Macha on March 30, 2005
    Oh NO. I knew a confrontation was going to happen sooner or later, but I think this is way sooner than Bulma or Mirai had intended.

    ?? Trunks doesn't seem too shocked to be looking at his mirror image. I wonder why that is?
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on March 29, 2005
    Previous review was mine... Forgot to typre my name! O_o
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 29, 2005

    Ohhh... Hiding sake screwed. Time for Plan B, Mirai. -_o


    My my... Trunks certainly seems informed about his alternate self, I wonder why that is... Had already been planning a little visit to the Mirai Timeline, Trunksie? *wink wink*

    Hha... I bet he'll make Mirai cut his hair so that he looks more like him, the narcisistic bastard :-)

    *can't help it. Bad ass Trunks sounds twistedly sexy*

    I see some people want Gohan in this... Well, why not humor them? You could make Gohan chase after Mirai and make Trunks jealous (or, whatever he feels seeing his prey being taken away but another). Hehe, you should definitely make things as hard for Trunks as you did for Mirai already.


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  • From ANON - Rayne on March 29, 2005
    Hell yeah! Now things ought to get VERY interesting. *sadistic grin* I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ More soon please!
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  • From ANON - Agent182 on March 29, 2005
    Wonderful chapter. I especially loved this line: “Who’s the victim tonight Mr. Briefs?” hehe pick one? Right? So, Now Mirai and Trunks will finally come face to face. This could prove to be very interesting. I hope to see an update soon... *shakes fist* I better see one ^_~

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  • From ANON - Agent182 on March 29, 2005
    After seeing the intriguing title... I just had to read this. Interesting, very. I enjoyed it so far and found myself smirking constantly. This fic almost seems like something going on in my life. Not in the same context of course... *is Trunks* no way. But that's why I kept reading. Your writing style is vaguely familiar but I can't put my finger on it.... I do like the fic and I hope for an update soon. It’s a change from all the other crap being written. Thanks for writing something worth reading. I will continue to read and review other chapters so hopefully I can help you with 'constructive criticism' so they call it... right... I just won't be a bitch about ^_~ good luck with the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Rayne on March 28, 2005
    Oh, I really hope we get to see interaction between the two Trunkses. I think that would be very interesting. I'd like to know exactly what would happen. I have my own thoughts (even some nice pervy ones ^o^), but I'd like to see how it all goes in this story. I hope Trunks ends up discovering Mirai soon. I really do. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on March 28, 2005
    I like mysteries.

    More I say. More.
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on March 27, 2005
    Well, I must say it's surprising... I never imagined Bulma would catch on the possibility of Trunks chasing Mirai.

    It was an interesting chapter destined to build up tension, though I can't wait the moment Miari and Trunks stand face to face :)

    Did Goten really kill himself? T_T

    Anyway, if Trunks ever had a lifelong friend it must mean he feels *some* sort of emotion, or did he expect to obtain something by feigning friendship?

    Hehe, the part of Vegeta being weirded out is great... I bet Vegeta is torn between feeling the royal saiyajin blood has been polluted, thus producing something less than perfection, or on the contrary, producing the perfect heartless warrior *shuders*
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  • From ANON - Macha on March 27, 2005
    Ah, the plot thickens. WHOOT. I am sooo loving this story. Please update soon. (you've been really good about updating so begging is just, well.... add it to your belt if you must... hehe)
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