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Reviews for Strong Heart

By : Camaro

From ANON - sugarmoe on July 31, 2006
Gotta say it. FUCKING FANTASTIC! That was the most... I can't even find the right words (besides 'FUCKING FANTASTIC') that are powerful enough to describe it! I read pretty much the beginning to chapter 24 and, oh my god! I cried so hard. I was on the phone to my friend for ages after, just sobbing! (She loved this fic too)... Anyway. Then you up-dated and you ended it like that and the tears just wouldn't stop! I dwelled on it for ages. But now, I'm over it (the crying) and now every once in a while I'll think about it and just grin 'cause their soo hot *drools*.

I must admit, I didn't entirely understand the end at first, but that didn't matter. 'Cause it was just soo well written that it didn't matter that I was too stupid to figure it out... The explanation really helped. Thanks for thinking of those who don't 'read between the lines'...

Anyway, just got to say again, that that was fantastic and 'Strong heart' is THE MOST beautiful and now my most favourite fic in the world!! You are amazing!
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From BrucesGirl on July 30, 2006
I read it again. Yup. From start to beginning.

You are amazing, Camaro. Simply fucking amazing. People fight so hard against things they don't understand until they are explained to them in ways that they can comprehend.

Isn't that just the way of things?

Thank you so much for this explanation of love. Maybe we should all be more careful when we say the words. They mean a lot more to me now.

BG
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From ANON - BOE_4eva on July 26, 2006
Camaro,
I know i just reviewed recently, but there was some more stuff that i wanted to say (In reading this review i appologise for grama and spelling errors ^_^.... i know that your very good at english, and it will most likely annoy you ^_^)
Reading that explanation really helped, i had so many crazy ideas running through my head... like i was thinking that the reason he was there was for 'unfinished buisness', well i guess its pretty similar if not the same.... When i first read the bit where someone took Trunks' chair right out from under him.... i was like "OMG, is Trunks imagining everything??!?!?!" but then i thought but everyone else was talking to him...So in this case your explanation super helped!!!
Sumthing else i wanted to say was, that i was reading through the reviews for Monster, and i noticed sum girl saying that she finally found a person whos a better writer than you..'Todesengel' claiming that'Todesengel' was unmatched or sumthig..... absolutely HILARIOUSE!!! hahahahahaha
NEways, as i said in my last review, you are a beautiful wrter, and i believe that you should write an original novel!! (thats if you dont already!!) I know id buy it!!
Well, newho, best be off.
Wish yuo all the best with your writing and your life!! ^_^
And i truely congradulate you for finishing the masterpiece! it was truely magnificent!
Later Dayz....Hope to chat with ya one day!! ^_^
Luv ya lots!!
Cassie

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From ANON - Kat on July 26, 2006
LOL. You know, I was wondering if you were going to reveal who Todesengel was or not. I'm glad that you decided to. I also appreciated your explanation, as I had not caught onto that moment between Mirai and Gohan before. Of course, I thought Mirai was alive when I first read that chapter. Now, I'm going to go back and reread this story and see what else I missed. Anyway, I look forward to more of Monster 2 and Perfection. Later!
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From ANON - Lina on July 25, 2006
OMG!!!! I'M BAWLING HERE!! THE LAST CHAPTER WAS SO MEAN!!! HE'S DEAD!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! :(
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From ANON - BOE_4eva on July 24, 2006
That was THE most beautiful fanfic i've ever read in my life!!!Your writting was fluent your idea was original and the ending..... i have never been so effected by sumthing in my life... i couldnt stop crying!Even now thinking about make me teary.... Miria Trunks was so well represented as was Gohan and Goten and Vegeta.... as for Trunks... i will always luv him to peices and his character was well done... i was so surprised that i grew attached to him, as i doubted i would at the start.... but the way you did it... wow.
You have to write another fic.... i just simply like your writting!!!
Rock on!!!
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From ANON - Asha on July 23, 2006
...bloody brilliant. the entire story. just bloody brilliant. really liked the twist there at the end, too. Excellent story.
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From ANON - Kat on July 23, 2006
I almost don't know what to say. First off, I'd definitely like to congradulate you on finishing this wonderful story. That is a great accomplishment in itself and you deserve to be proud. I cannot BELIEVE that Mirai Trunks was dead that whole time. Seriously, what an unexpected twist at the end; I loved it. Well, I loved the whole story honestly. I just don't know how Trunks is dealing with everything. His mind has been overloaded and the urge for some type of drug must be insane right about then. I've always said that I don't want to know the future, and this story shows why. I don't want to know when my mother's going to die, or my friends. And yet, maybe if I did, I wouldn't take them for granted ever. I mean, I try not to, as I'm sure most people do, but when you see someone all the time it's hard to miss them. Anyway, I love how you ended that story with "His heart just wasn't strong enough." I suppose we can only hope that Trunks' heart is. Then again, I doubt he'd survive long if Goten died. I'm also so glad that you had Trunks save Goten from becoming the same type of heartless monster that Trunks became during those years. Hopefully, those two can enjoy some time together finally before everyone starts dieing around them. I just can't imagine walking around outside knowing that sometime very soon nearly everyone I see is going to pass on. Well, if anything, my family and friends are going to be wondering what's wrong with me over the next few weeks until I forget that I'm scared to lose them. Thank-you for writing this story, for making me remember that there are a lot of people I love and I would miss dearly.
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From ANON - don't tell me on July 22, 2006
amazing.
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From ANON - BOE_4eva on July 17, 2006
OMG!! You MUST continue!!!!
I simply can not go on if you dont continue this fic!!! At this moment, it is by FAR my favoutie fanfic!!!!
I am very upset that miria left *cries* i luv miria I just wanted him to screw truks so bad!!! but never mind
PLEASE update soon!!!

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From ANON - Kat on July 13, 2006
�Four long wasted years.�

LOL. That�s what everyone says when they graduate from high school, no? I know it wasn�t meant to be taken in that context, but I couldn�t get the thought out of my mind.

Seriously though, I started crying halfway into this chapter and never managed to stop. This chapter is just so damn beautiful. The story of that virus was like a slap on the face, it was so unexpected and so ultimately sad. What hope does remain for Trunks when hearing that everyone in his family, not to mention billions of other people, are going to die? And yet, he had the courage to reach out for the one thing that had never failed him. I wish I could say that I�m even a little bit mad at Goten for what he did, but that would be an absolute lie. After all, Goten wants to get on with his life and, for good reasons, doesn�t believe that is still possible while loving Trunks. I would have done the same exact thing, assuming that I had the sheer strength to do so. I can only hope that Trunks has the courage to go after Goten, as many times as it takes. And I know I�m babbling on but I just can�t seem to help it. I�m still in awe over how absolutely beautiful a story this is, and how extremely talented of a writer you are. This time, I can�t wait to read the next chapter. Of course, I would still adore this story if that was the end; I�d be depressed for awhile, but I�d understand. Until next time...
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From ANON - Matt on July 13, 2006
All I can say is that this story is beautiful. I've never felt so absolutely enraptured by a story... till this one. I was powerless against the emotions the words that flowed beautifully invoked. Nothing could move me from my position in front of my computer, not even the call of sleep. Your story is a piece of art that should forever be admired. Pain, sorrow, and love... I can't ask for a better story.

There are stories that people remember for years due to their beauty, and this is one of them. Please, continue your writing. Continue weaving masterful tales that pull no punches but are so beautiful. Continue breathing life into this world with your words. And continue making people feel, just as you have made me feel. There is nothing more I can ask except this.
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From ANON - BrucesGirl on June 13, 2006
My dearest. In the truth to our lives, we search for one truth above all, and that's how we can change our past. Perhaps we cannot change the actions that we had committed in years past, but we can change what they mean to us in the future. This story...this masterpiece...You've taught me something about myself that I never knew. I've lied to myself in telling myself that I was actually happy with being mediocre. With being quiet. And now, my rage comes out in a roaring monster, seeking penance for all the time that he's been locked up in my heart.

This entire story... It may mean different things to different people, but this is what it means to me.

As surely as Trunks is faced with the love that he turned away, I am faced with the freedom that I sacrificed in order to achieve a family. While many tell me I should be grateful for what I have, I am not. I seek day in and day out for something that will fill the constant void that sex, drugs, and cruelty will not. I may have a gentle heart, but my heart is nothing compared to the sleeping rage that has laid dormant for so long. Just as Mirai and Gohan are faced with separation, I am faced with the cruelty that makes me doubt my power.

I will stop lying to myself. Sometimes, the truth hurts worse than the lie, but at least the truth is constant.

Thank you so much for this masterpiece. It was truly amazing, and it still will be for those that read it.
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From ANON - Macha on June 04, 2006
Ouch....having to relive that moment in his and Goten's history could not have been fun.

Miria seems to have this need to push Trunks in a certain direction. The end gave me a feeling like he knew what Trunks would go through if the boy didn't get his act together and go after Goten.

I am certain he does with 'his' Gohan dieing unexpectedly in his time line.

I hope it is not to late for Trunks to put it back together with Goten...but I don't think Goten is going to make it easy. I woudln't.
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From ANON - Macha on June 04, 2006
So, Trunks has a little drama thrown his direction, and he goes right back to his comfort zone of drugs.

And, Yes, it is truely amazing to find out how many friends you didn't know you had when they hear you have a 'party' going on.

Ouch, having to relive his past while doing something that tainted it even more. *shakes head* Goten had a lot of strength to stay with him and continuing to hope that Trunks would follow through on his promises. Goten had even more strength to know when it was time to let go.

So, here is Trunks, back in his 'element' and really not happy with himself and those around him AT ALL.

"His eyes flew open with hatred.

They.... had cost him.... EVERYTHING."

Very normal to try to find someone else to be a scapegoat in this type of situation, when really, he should be pissed at himself.

Eep! What is he doing? in a sense, Trunks isn't lieing if Videl can fly it may just be possible for them to BUT he isn't teaching them the ki manipulation necessary. OMG...they jumped? Just like that? Did these people have no experience with drugs at all?

No, I can't imagine Miria is happy about this at all. I'd be pissed too.

Wow, those letters are tough to read. Interesting how they tried to protect each other by keeping the content light, and how much they were able to say without actually saying, because they both knew they weren't in a fairy tale. Why talk about the obvoius.

Shayna is a very strong woman. I like her.

I have to wonder if this lesson will stick or if Miria is just wasting more of his time.

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