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  • From ANON - chayron on January 27, 2006
    I cried.

    That was so...emotional, so fulfilling, so overwhelming.

    And one just has to love Vegeta.
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  • From Kugatsu on January 27, 2006
    Look, I started crying.

    This is some powerful stuff. I hope you know that.
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  • From ANON - ~Dark*Princess*Pan~ on January 23, 2006
    Wow... watch Queer as Folk much? *smiles* I love Trunks as a sociopath! It's truly entertaining to see him take on an even more extreme role than Brian Kinney! I love how you're not afraid to venture down the path of incest and enjoy it at the same time! I'm absolutely craving Vegeta/Trunks right now for some reason... AND Mirai/Trunks! Then again, my philosophy is that as long as there are at least two hot gay guys together, I'M HAPPY! Please please PLEASE update as soon as possible because I'm 100% enthralled by your writing. ~^-^~
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  • From ANON - laur on January 20, 2006
    Well.. I finished so far.. it took awhile.. between breaks.. work and traveling.. BUT I finally finished.. and now.. I have to say.. this is and excelent read here... Very nice.. and vivid... I wish I still had more to read.. So I urge you to continue posting.. Please!!

    Very awesome... I love it.. It definetly keeps my attention.
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  • From ANON - laur on January 19, 2006
    Whoa.. that was a really awesome chapter... I usually comment at the end of the story .. but.. yeah.. I am a sucker for something that has to do with vegeta.. and damn.. he really fucked with trunks mind.. Just great.. Just awesome..
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  • From ANON - Orme on January 17, 2006
    I don't think I've reviewed yet. But I've been reading this story, and I totally love it!! This was an awesome chapter--extremely intense, angry, and erotic. It made my blood boil. ^^ You're a phenomenal writer! Keep up the good work!!!


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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on January 17, 2006
    By the way, forgot to mention that Trunks sounds like the Devil, mixing lies with the truth, to sound more convincing. certain people have a knack for knowing other people's weaknesses and memories that provide them with a source of guilt and shame to weaken them. This is a very dangerous verbal attack which most people easely fall prey to, if they don't prepare for it in advance.

    Like Father Merrick said to Father Karras when they were performing the exorcism on the possessed Regan (in the movie "The Exorcist"): "It is not wise to make conversations with the Devil, for he's a deceiver, and mixes lies with the truth."
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2006
    Undoubtedly the best story i have read on this site
    to-date. This chapter gave me goose bumps on
    my arms. Plz PLZ update as soon as you can. I'll
    be watching the comp til you do!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Princess Koriand'r on January 17, 2006
    Oh My God...Trunks is one suck fuck, but and honest one. Go to respect that. Girlfriend, this is showing me Gohan in a new light, so far removed from the innocent, gental boy that I have pictured in my mind. While it's a shock, I "can' see it. For someone who's personality was so light, there was really only one way he could break, and thats pretty much how it went. I was so glued to this chapter. I really can't wait till you update. Make it soon, m'kay?

    ~Kenya
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  • From ANON - BlackTigerG2 on January 17, 2006
    wow....this is great! This is like a whole new level of literary work I have ever read!! PLZ continue as soon as possible, and even if u hit writer's block, I don't care. 'Cuz the wait is totally worth it, can't wait for an update. But I do pose one question. Is Goten's part in this story over? Or does he come back and face Trunks and/or his brother? Because I would completely flip if that happens, ooh, can't u just feel the angst? OK, until next time! ::Gives Son Grin::
    -BlackTigerG2

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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on January 16, 2006
    (Is speechless)

    Poor Gohan... or should I say, poor Trunks?

    How is Trunks ever gonna get the blurriest ressemblance of a life, now?
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  • From ANON - Jenn on January 15, 2006
    Hello Todesengle,

    Other than the name being a mouthful...I loved this chapter. I have to say, the blood was a good touch. I do hope Mirai knocks some sense into Trunks though. I almost threw my laptop in a hissy fit with some of the comments Trunks made. Oh well, I have to wait I suppose. Poo.

    _Jenn
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  • From ANON - Maiyette on January 14, 2006
    This is an incredible chapter! All the blood , guts and sex made me dizzy- -I've got to say, you're one of the best writers in Affn I've had the good luck to stumble across. Please please continue the great job you're doing...but take a break first, you've earned it!
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  • From ANON - Shay on January 14, 2006
    Wow. What an amazing, beautiful and corrupted story. You really know how to captivate people with the vivid imagery, and blood and gore. This story has strong sensuality and sexuality. Everything just flows so well and I'm just stunned by every chapter. I feel as though some of the lessons intended to be taught to the characters are meant to be taught to me. One thing about Mirai strikes me, he's trying to teach Trunks things and basicually being a hypocrite like he's holier than thou when it seems, he needs to learn some of the things he's trying to teach. Or maybe, he's learning himself ALONG with Trunks. You know what? The way you've written this; it's like all of this is what could have been cut out in DBZ, what Akira Toriyama meant it to be between the fine lines. Stories like this make you think; and you know it's powerful when the reader is shocked into finding out something about themselves. You did an extremly destructive job with the violence and gore. And the lesson in love? It's amazing because not many of us think of love as fucked up as Mirai has shown Trunks through David and Susan; I know I didn't. I know I would have thought David's love of his stepmother as an obsession and nothing more; but you've done an excellent job of describing love in all it's shades and in showing how it's never just beautiful and painfree. So, we shouldn't look for it in others because we won't find it in anyone but ourselves. I think that was a lesson learned through Gohan's pretenses. Thanks for the inspiration.

    Love,
    Shay
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  • From ANON - chayron on January 14, 2006
    So Trunks pretended that he was having sex with Goten, and Gohan imagined that he's with Mirai.

    Ah, but that was gorgeaous. The struggling, the pain, hurt, instincts revealed from both sides… Not once I admired how you turn a fight into music. So full of emotions that the ears seem to burst. And it’s never enough – I try to catch every word, every gush of wind in the scene. Ah well, I just love this story.
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