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Reviews for Kings, Tyrants, and Demons

By : Makota2112
  • From ANON - Dania on July 12, 2006
    I didn't fall off the face of the planet ^_^. I just had a few things to do right around the rim- but I's back now. O.o Wow, damn Makota. I LOVED this scene. You've got such a knack for making things visually accessible through words. Oo. I can just SEE the setting.....though I have to admit, the tackily sewed on insignia on King Vegeta's jacket made me snicker. Furiza in the back seat made me laugh outright. But as for the scene with Piccolo and Vegeta.

    Oh.
    My.
    God.

    It literally gave me shivers. Just the -raw- emotion that filtered through. Pain, anger, hurt, just...this overwhelming crush to the chest.

    I loved it.... the sadomasochistic bitch that I am, I loved every minute of it.

    Wonderful chapter, hon...

    Short or no, it kicked much ass. ^^
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  • From ANON - Mehla Seraphim on July 12, 2006
    Man I got spine tingles with that one line. "If I fill it, will you come back?" Holy crap! Lol. I loved the dream sequence. Poor Vegeta and Piccolo. Man, I can only imagine what would happen if they saw each other outside of their dreams.
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  • From ANON - Lee on July 11, 2006
    The last two chapters were a tad bit short, but still good none the less. Luv the fact namek is being destroyed and i dont rilly kno y :P
    Keep up the great work !
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  • From ANON - iris on July 11, 2006
    you actualy thanked me for reviewing?! *sniff*
    thats so kind *sniff*
    i would love to hear from you^_^
    i cant wait to see how veggie and piccolo get back together
    i love the pair
    its one of my faverite couples
    along with vegeta/radditz
    ^______________^

    cant wait till next chap,

    lots of love,
    iris
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  • From ANON - Cocoa Puff on July 11, 2006
    I Love The Story. You Have My Hating Goku & Trucks During The Whole Story LOL. Keep Up The Good Work
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  • From ANON - Jordan on July 11, 2006
    YAY, another chapter. Its left me slitily confused but I've felt that way for awhile now.
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on July 11, 2006
    Oh my, I must say that was not what I expected but it definately shows how fucked up poor piccolo's mind is right now, and I'm not sure if it was a dream or their minds connecting, very confusing but I'm sure it will make more sense as the story unfolds, thanks for updating that was a lovely surprise, and so grisly hehe keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Casandra on July 11, 2006
    I am so happy to see this updated and I loved the I love you hate you thing I know how that feels!, thanks for the great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lee on June 30, 2006
    Finally caught up again, its been hard with the new changes and stuff, but still another great chapter :) I really enjoy the diversity and detail between planets and such. Pretty disurbing dream for goten tho >_
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  • From ANON - Dania on June 28, 2006
    I've been a week without a computer, and I come back oo and you've updated. Piccolo scares the HELL out of me, but I can't help but be drawn to it. I am LOVING his newly rediscovered demonhood, and ...I you've just...got him.. perfectly sadistic, evil... and its just hot as hell. I won't lie on that. Just, damn. I wonder how Vegeta's gonna take meeting him. That's gonna be either a battle and a half..or the fuckfest to end all fuckfests. Please keep writing this, I'm STILL addicted after three or four years.
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  • From ANON - Jordan on June 27, 2006
    Another great chapter, whats going to happen next.

    I would like an update email.
    davifflaelan@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - iris on June 25, 2006
    hi
    i LOVE your story.
    i was suprised to see you updated
    i almost thougt i sa everything left on the web about vegeta
    i.m from the netherland (and still live here)
    i would love to talk to you sometime but i cant add a yahoo acount
    e-mail or something please

    love.
    iris
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  • From ANON - Mehla Seraphim on June 24, 2006
    Oh yes please notify me. Lol. I loved this chapter. And I'm so looking foward to where I think this may be heading. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on June 23, 2006
    Oh oh I can't wait! I love you lol especially when you update so fast hehe, and i so can't wait to see what you write next, even if it takes longer i'll wait, this chapter was awesome love that piccolo's demon side has come out, i was thinking something like that was going to happen, mainly since before the merging with nail or kami, piccolo was only linked(sort of) with his father(evil muahahaha) so now with nail and kami gone and the loss of his mate I'd think he'd be weaker resisting Piccolo Damon Senior's influence but again sooo can't wait ,excellent job as usual
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  • From ANON - Casandra on June 22, 2006
    I really like this series and hope more is going to come, is there any way to know when a new chapter is up like a group or something?
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