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Reviews for Kings, Tyrants, and Demons

By : Makota2112
  • From ANON - Lee on August 29, 2005
    Oops i mean id rather c option 1 more then 2 :P
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  • From ANON - Lee on August 29, 2005
    As much as i'd like to hear about earth i dont rilly mind and it would be kool if piccolo and vegeta ended up never going back, although im not sure wat u would do with goten :S

    i lik option 2 more then 1
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  • From on August 29, 2005
    Personally I don't care about the others. Except maybe to see the reactions they had after Piccolo left. But I wouldn't say dedicate a whole chapter to them. I'd be more interested in what Piccolo, Vegeta and Goten were up to.
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  • From ANON - ArrogantMessiah on August 29, 2005
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    The story is about Vegeta and Piccolo, I think it isn't really necessary to include the going on's of earth at this point. Unless you have something in mind plotwise, it would be redundant to include the "meanwhiles", the readers basically already know how everybody on earth feels through Piccolo's last encounters with everyone- I just think that the standpoints of everyone have already been stated. Also, there is an element of suspense for the reader when they dont know whats going on somewhere else or what is going to happen with the situation- somehow it makes the characters' interactions seem more sincere since the readers' experience the same kind of emotions at the confrontation.

    However, you're a good writer and could build up suspense like that even when including the perspectives from earth.

    I'm loyal to Vegeta and Piccolo- I want to see more of them rather then less.
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  • From on August 27, 2005
    That was great ^^. Wee more Piccolo. Lol. I was wondering if he'd go to Namek. Now I know. Lol. I can imagine that'd be weird for him. That'd be so funny if he got hit on too. Vegeta and Piccolo do meet up again at some point right? Lol. I might just be bummed this is the last.
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  • From ANON - Pooky Wooky on August 25, 2005
    Again, a brillant chapter... (Can't spell, too late in the night, falling a... sleepppp) Please do write more. For some odd reason I knew Piccolo would end up heading to Namek... Will he ever return to his mate? Come on, stop leaving me in the dark here and help me out! Lmao, Keep up the great work.
    Your Friend, PC
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  • From ANON - BballAnimeLover89 on August 25, 2005
    Good story you got there! But, you need more Goku and Trunks scenes pronto!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Alex on August 25, 2005
    The quality and fluency of your writing is superb and a delight to read. You're truly talented, and I love this fic. I will be checking back for updates regularly! I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2005
    when are you going to update salvation? thats like the best story by you
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  • From ANON - Dania on August 24, 2005
    *wicked grin* And here we see the veneer of "good" begin to slough off and reveal the warrior underneath. Godsdamn, I love the way you begin to peel back his personality, and reveal the kernel of demon within. This chapter is one of the best so far. Its WONDERFUL in showing just how much Piccolo is changing. From not wanting to think about his problem right now (denial) to showing flare ups of anger (losing control) You see his perfect mask begin to slip. It makes him all the more real, all the more tangible.

    It also makes me wanna smack Gohan like the whiny little bitch that he is.

    Lovely job here. I can practically FEEL his confusion, and his anger- radiating in spikes from his persona.

    Loverly.

    Just loverly.
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  • From ANON - Lee on August 24, 2005
    kinda short but i rilly lik seeing how piccolo's doin and hope the next chapter is about gohan/18/krillin/trunks/goku recovering from piccolos attack :P

    keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Lee on August 13, 2005
    As always i loved the chappie and hope you get more involved in the space travelling(dunno wat 2 call it) and hope there will be som sort of confrontation between vegeta and ex-ppl of the planet trade or jus som random person, wanna c him fight if ul let em :S

    anyway keep up the good work
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  • From on August 13, 2005
    Yay an update. And so soon too O_o. I was thinking it'd take a few more months. Fweee >_< I'm so anxious to see if or when Piccolo and Vegeta cross paths. Piccolo traveling through space wouldn't know about the stuff on the P.A.C. I wonder how this will turn out! Omg I'm so excited lol.
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  • From ANON - vashta on August 04, 2005
    No fair!!!!!!! Goku is a perv, he should have been beaten, not killed, but beaten. He should take responsibility for all of this. Please, let Veg and Pic get back together, I mean this is all about them, right? As for Goten he is right in his anger, Goku is no kind of daddy. Well, now that my tirade about totally fictional characters is over, this has been a great story, all three parts. I am waiting for the next update patiently.
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  • From ANON - jenna on August 02, 2005
    WOW! This sequel is getting really good. You are a very talented writer and I love all your stories! I wanna know whats gonna happen with Piccolo. Update soon!!

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