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Reviews for Kings, Tyrants, and Demons

By : Makota2112
  • From ANON - Dania on July 28, 2005
    I'm sorry for not having replied in a long time. Had certain factors that popped up, and you are so busy all the time. ^^ However, LOVE the chapter. And I respect Piccolo's shredding vestiges of self control that he had to practice. Still wished he'd ripped Goku and Trunks apart, but I can dream. However, LOVE the interplay between him and Bulma- Absolutely beautiful. And....not to mention. Piccolo so dangerous....The mental images are stunning.


    Sheer fact: Absolutely love this so far.

    Can't wait to see the next installment when you're able to put it up.

    And there weren't that many mistakes that I could see.
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  • From ANON - Lee on July 27, 2005
    sry 2 post again forget 2 write my name ^^^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2005
    This chapter was amazing im so happy that piccolo at least beat the shit out of a few ppl even tho it wasn't trunks or goku it was still great.
    So i guess piccolo is going after vegeta? and just curious is his ship faster since they kinda talked about how fast it took him 2 new vegeta against brolly
    Keep up the amazzzing work and plz update soon
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  • From on July 27, 2005
    Ooo I wasn't expecting Piccolo to leave too. Stupid Goku, Piccolo shoulda killed him anyways. Lol I'm glad you updated. Lol it's so funny I check randomly but my heart speeds up when I see a chapter update number Lol.
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  • From ANON - bob on July 27, 2005
    you're a great writer and i luv this story!!!! please update soon!
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  • From Kugatsu on July 26, 2005
    I read all of your stories in a mere two hours.

    You're extremely talented and I would be extrememly pleased to see this story continue. Not only are all the emotions real, the plot plausable, and the characterizations spot on...I just, this is amazing. Simply amazing. The twists the turns the everything. I love this.

    I do hope you update soon.

    Schwarzwald.
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  • From on June 11, 2005
    Yay you updated. Chapter felt so short. But I'm just glad to see something. Lol I hope the next chapters explain Piccolo's nuttiness. And perhapas gets Vejiita to come back.
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  • From ANON - Lee on June 10, 2005
    That was an amazing chapter althought it did take long i liked it alot though it didn't talk about piccolo much, Anyway keep up the good work and id really like 2 c vegeta conquer some random planet or kill a bounty hunter :)
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  • From ANON - colt on June 05, 2005
    no matter how many times i read your storyes i still love thema nd caint get enough. its hard being paticent waitting for more but it must be done i guess. i hope africa was fun. caint wait to see more of your amazing tails. truly a fan,
    colt
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  • From on April 21, 2005
    O..m...g...w...t...f...b...b..q....?..!....

    You're back!!! Yay! And such lovely chapters! Glorious lovely angsty chapters! Waaa. This is the highlight of my day! Perhaps week. That might sound sad but I nearly gave up. But I kept your other fics in my favorites. And My patience has rewarded me! Wooo hooo. *dances*

    Piccolo was just how I invisioned he'd be after Vegeta left. Poor Piccolo. I hope ya update soon ^^ Hehe.
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  • From ANON - The Priestess on April 20, 2005
    omg!omg! my pooooor pikkoro! what happened to him! it's sooo horrible! whats next? whats next! I'm waiting for mooore!
    [please exuse my poore english, i'm from poland:)]
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  • From ANON - Dania on April 19, 2005
    *drops the pencil she had held in her mouth*

    Holy fuck in a leather leotard oO.

    My GOD that was the hottest thing I've ever seen in my damn life. I'm freaking stunned. I've seen ONE decent demonic Pic in a fiction. ONE. And she writes non-yaoi. But..DAMN. This..this is really freaking impressive. ESPECIALLY when he nearly kills that little tattle-tale Gohan. >< Bout TIME that kid got some damn sense knocked into him. oO.. *is just stunned* I hope your trip to Africa is a good one, and damn sorry about reviewing so late. I've been having troubles on the comp like you wouldn't believe.


    I'm...just...wow, Makota.

    I fucking love this.

    *grinning at the end of the chapter* I smell blood in the water.

    This is gonna be gooooooooood. ^^ *gives two thumbs up*


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  • From ANON - jaygoose on April 19, 2005
    Sweet, glorious action. Piccolo is evil. I missed him so!!!! *is giddy* Gohan was sort of an ass in the last fic if I remember correctly. Oh well, I hope Piccolo doesn't kill 18 and Krillin though. I'm starting to like them. *pouts*
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  • From ANON - colt on April 18, 2005
    wow ur realy getting even better then i expected. i love readinfg about my faveorit characters from ur point ove viwe. u have a rather twisted mind at some point but it makes the reading all that harder to let go of. reading unfinished work is hard it takes so much time to writte but it is understandable between liveing ur social life and school and whatever elts gose on with you. i have ideas for a fic of my own but after reading some of them from here i do not see how i could ever compeate. u have the best skills i have seen so far. Piccolo is realy useing his full potential now thanks to u and i always thought something would happen between them. Even though he withheld info frome his mate i realy hope that they patch things up even if it means killing off a few others or destroying earth. i compleatly understand why no one likes the idea of goku and trunks. 18 has no right telling gohon how to handdel it. she caint possibly understand what its like not from his view atleast but u r a very sensibal person and however u deside to send this fic im possitive it will be grate. i caint wait to read more!

    truly a fan colt
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on April 17, 2005
    Awesomeness! I never expected that from Piccolo, but I certainly love it. Carnage! YES! Too bad Goku and Trunks escaped. I'm still pissed at them from UBII. Go Piccolo! Crush them! ...I'm not sadistic...really.. *shifty eyes*

    Update again soon! *bounces around the room*
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