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Reviews for Kings, Tyrants, and Demons

By : Makota2112
  • From ANON - Lee on April 16, 2005
    Its not that i dont like it its that these usually come on a weekly basis and i suppose it didn't hav enuf action after the huge events that happened :)

    this chap was great and it looks lik a few ppl will be killed off?we'll be seeing the dragon soon i bet lol

    again, great chapter
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on April 12, 2005
    Dammit! That was mean! Oh well... I can't even imagine what's going on in Piccolo's head. I can't wait to see what you have planned. This is getting good already and its only the third chapter. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on April 11, 2005
    Piccolo? Yes! Reel him in! I want to know his take on all of this. I like the hostility going on between Trunks and Gohan. And 18 is just so understanding...I want to hug her. I wonder what Goten and Vegeta are up to... mm...I'm rambling. Loved the chapter and update again soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Dania on April 10, 2005
    *and tilts head, re-reading chapter* I like Eighteen, I REALLY like Eighteen- a very ball busting bitch. And as much as I really don't like Goku, if he's happy- then let him be. Gohan either needs to accept things or just leave- but with the way things are going ..eh.

    I love how you're getting the plot all twisted, and its jsut the beginning.

    I just wonder what state of mind that Piccolo is going to be in. I have a feeling he's walking that tightrope between sanity- and full blow-demonhood.

    Either way..

    This is going to kick ass, I can feel it.

    Another well done filler chapter ^____^


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  • From ANON - Lee on April 10, 2005
    this one is pretty good considering the last one was somewhat dull(still good tho) since i really hate trunks/goku now, i just wanna c them put in there place hopefully by gohan.
    just curious if your going to be bashing them or not?(hope so)
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  • From jaygoose on April 07, 2005
    You're back! You're back! *falls to the floor in utter ecstasy* I am so happy there's another sequel. I can't believe Goten went along. And Vegeta let him. The second chapter was great. Wonderful hidden recap you had there. Very clever. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on April 05, 2005
    Haha..chapter 2 made me feel really nostalgic as it brought back memories of the final chapter of Uncharted Waters. Ah the carnage...I remember how I held my hand over my mouth with the thought, "HOLY SHIT!" flying through my mind. The way chapter 2 played out makes my hyped for the next chapter. I'm anxious to see what the beaten and hospitalized have to say. *dances* Update again soon, please! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Saiyanb on April 04, 2005
    Hi Makoto it's B. I'm so happy to see you writing again, you were always one of my favorite authors, you write emotions so well. Your fic Unconditional Bonds really made me love the VegetaXPiccolo pair and was probably the inspiration for my fic "Hail to the King" (I really should finish that...). Anyway I'm so glad you're writing this, truthfully I was kind of disappointed the the ending for the fic before this one (can't remember the name off the top of my head). You explained that it was rushed and just to wrap it up, but I was like w-what... no!!! You can't leave it like 'that'!
    Anyway this is starting out good, we've got some interesting plot bunnys to work with. You've got to wonder what Goku's thoughts are going to be when he finds out Goten went with Vegeta. My first thought what he's going to think Vegeta took him to get even, but if everyone knows Goten went willing, it sounds like it'll turn into an angst fest. And poor Trunks (can't say his choice was a good one, I really don't see the GokuXTrunks pairing, they just seen to have nothing in common. Maybe Mirai Trunks, but not chibi... shrug, I still want to see where their relationship goes). And poor, poor Piccolo. Oh, I hope he doesn't go into a depressed mental rant, I want him to go out there and take back what's his. Piccolo's a very strong character I can't see him giving up or letting go on someone or thing he cares for.
    Anyway please update when you get the chance, write at your own pass I'll be happy so long as you keep it up.
    b-chan
    p.s. Maybe I'll do you some fan art too. Good fics usually get the creative juices flowing for me and art just draws its self.
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  • From ANON - Lee on April 04, 2005
    Hooray, second chapter and i suppose this one is essental or something? since you usually dont involve characters unless something like them being gay/married/widowed/killed off, i could go on but ya kno i still love how this story isn't from a single POV and very...original, thats the word to describe it :D
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  • From ANON - Dania on April 04, 2005
    oO.

    Methinks Piccolo is either going to be uberly pissed, or really really close to going demonic again. And filler chapters are great things, they are needed to help further plot along, even when there isn't that much action. *tilts head* I feel for Yamcha, and I really feel for Krillen too, I don't usually say that, but he's gotta be there to help pick up what pieces are left, and honestly- probably the only sane one that's gonna be left.

    I just hope nothing fucks this up...

    >>


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  • From ANON - Lee on April 03, 2005
    Oh god i've read unconditional bonds and uncharted waters(having missed school to read them) and i loved every chapter since you have so many twists and so many POV's. I think these are incredible and i hope you'll finish Kings, Tyrants and Demons!
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  • From ANON - colt on April 01, 2005
    arnt u gaNNA WRITTE MORE IN HERE AND SALVATION? I HOPE U DO
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  • From ANON - Dania on March 31, 2005
    O.O I'm so damn glad to see this started up again, especially this series. This story, and one other is about the only reason I ever read DBZ fanfiction anymore. Most of the other stuff has just gone to shit, or people have gone away. PiccoloxVegeta is such an interesting pairing and its also a more logical one to me, as well. Once again, you blow me away with your eye for detail, your wonderful ability to portray a character without losing his essense.

    All in all, I can't wait to see what happens next.

    I am forever your faithful fan.

    ^^
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  • From ANON - colt on March 28, 2005
    Makota i am quickly becomeing a very big fan i hope u write more and i hope u show a littel as to what happens to piccolo.

    colt
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on March 26, 2005
    MAKOTA! I've been waiting for this sequel forever! When I saw this story listed, I swear I had a small seizure. Finally, the sequel to the first fic I ever read on AFF. This just made my freakin month! I feel like I can do a backflip right now.

    A great first chapter for it too. I was wondering what became of Goten. Oh god, I'm SOO happy I can barely form words right now.

    Update again soon. VERY SOON. I WANT MORE!

    Lots of love,
    Yuurei



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