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By : LaRieaux
  • From ANON - Camaro on April 23, 2005
    Very good emotion. If it's possible, I actually feel sorry for Chi Chi. Is this going to be a chi chi/yamcha? Seemed a bit like that.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Macha on April 22, 2005
    As much as I hate to see Goku portrayed as a 'bad' guy, I still like this story. It's very refreshing to read from Chichi's POV. It is also very realistic.

    Now to wonder why she asked Yamcha over. Has she even contemplated the implications or her motives for doing so? hehe

    Once again, Great Job!
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  • From ANON - oznerol on April 22, 2005
    what is going on she needs some medicine or something
    um a liitle less depresion and a little moe progres next please
    thank you
    oh man chichineeds a major vacation and fast
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  • From ANON - jebus on April 22, 2005
    Im sorry. I didn't mean cirtical errors. I guess I should have clarified. I am an English Major in college. Your grammar/syntax are fine. Really, for the average reader it's good. I just see sentences that could be tightened up. Nothing major, just stuff I would have changed. It's just me. Really. Sorry for the confusion.

    Gomen
    Matthew.
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  • From ANON - Jebus on April 22, 2005
    Well, it's certainly sad. Few grammar/syntax errors. Not a fan of Chi Chi fics, but glad I stopped by. I'd consider reading the rest.
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  • From ANON - oznerol on April 10, 2005
    *shock* man she got some issues in this fic what is going on update soon because she needs some serious help.

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  • From ANON - caotic on April 09, 2005
    good start and keep makin more after this 1st one.
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on April 02, 2005
    I like it a lot please write more it be one of my favorites if you continue
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  • From ANON - Vegeta\'s Mate on April 01, 2005
    O_O; Wow, I never thought of ChiChi like that before. I guess if I were in a position like hers I would end up being bitter and cold to the man that I had pleged my life to as well. I like this fic and I will most definately keep reading! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Macha on March 29, 2005
    Oh my. A very angsty Chichi. I was very surprised that this was in her POV, but it's a welcome change from the norm. Hmmm, my only advice to Chichi at the moment is, "Get some lube." Not that it is an answer to all her problems, but at least it won't hurt anymore.

    I am very interested in seeing where chapter 2 will go with this.
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  • From ANON - Wow on March 29, 2005
    Great. Can't wait for more!
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