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Reviews for Hell is Lost Innocents

By : hibaakaiko
  • From Didders on September 03, 2005
    One of my all time favorite pairings! I absolutely love Raditz, and this here is a nice little twist on hell. ^__^
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  • From ANON - malimillions on April 08, 2005
    Man, this is a good story-- plus you've managed to use analogies and euphomisms that are completely original to anything else of this genre that i've read--- you get a gold star, mate!
    *laughs* sorry, elementary school humor, there.
    This is very intersting -- goku both goes against and follows the tug and pull of his sayajin blood in the back of his brain..... making him ashamed
    yet acceptent of sex with raddizu (i -love- seme raddiz x uke goku fics!) .... but at the same time, raddiz leaves him naked with the chilling promise
    that no one was to ever hear of this..... this is such an interesting contridiction! Sayajins will/can have sex with siblings -- biologically/ instinctiually it's
    acceptable, but socially to saya-jins it's not? Or was that another way raddiz was going to munipulate lil' goku?

    And to leave his clueless brother naked in H.F.I.L. ? Woah!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 06, 2005
    wow the story was kinky in a sad type of way.
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  • From ANON - Camaro on April 06, 2005
    Damn, and I was so expecting a storyline from the summary. Bahwell... this will be funner to review anyways. I've very quickly noticed something about you... you seem to think that all a story on this site needs to consist of is a lemon, otherwise, it's not as entertaining. Well, that's just stupid. True, most stories on this site CONTAIN sex, but they do ALSO contain... well, let's just say, CONTENT? This is just getting irritating. I'm so tired of dumb one shots, so you know what? You're going to be made an example of and from now on, I'm going to make it my personal goal to go after every moron that decides to post CRAP on this website and call it a story.

    Not that I'm calling you a moron or even saying this is crap. For what it is, it's good. I think you write well enough (like I've said before) and your lemons.. (while boring and uneventful... in fact, consisting of what I figure is more or less just excerpts from other people's already boring and uneventful lemons) are decent. But you can't make a story out of a lemon. Or more specifically, you can't make a lemon a story. There has to be more. Because if the people on this site are even remotely like me, we've ALL read our share of one shots and have CERTAINLY read enough lemons to not be surprised by much of anything anymore.

    Lemons are boring and aren't new. There's really nothing you can write in a lemon (save for the "heart" thing.. good lord) that could shock or surprise us. That's what creativity and originality are for. USE THEM. PLEASE!

    I want you to impress me by writing something with a plot. That way, I won't have to come over here anymore to lecture you! haha

    Camaro
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