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By : chayron

From ANON - Macha on April 26, 2005
O.O A drunk Goku going out the door? AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh. With those kinds of thoughts plauging him? Ah CRAP. I hope he doesn't stir up too much trouble.

Update SOON!!
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From ANON - kit-kit on April 26, 2005
wow is it just me or is goku getting really pissy.
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From ANON - Camaro on April 26, 2005
::Grumbles::

I can't believe I have to come all the way over here and handle this. Anon, shut up. You made Chayron cry. Now, I don't know how many people I've made cry, and I don't really give a damn. But this wasn't your business. I know Chrome well enough to promise that if she felt so inclined, she could have defended herself. Obviously, she didn't care. Things are cool with me and Chayron and if you fucking think that I'm so God damn incapable of sticking up for myself, keep it up and I'll prove otherwise.

Awww, Serenity! Now I just feel like sending Vegeta's Mate a pile of roses! hahaha... I didn't feel offended by what you said or anything. You just stated what you felt and were pretty respectful about it. I appreciate that.

But Anon, you need to shut up. Seriously. I think it's cool that you would stick up for me and Chrome but it's not necessary and definitely not to the extent that you took it. One more thing out of you and I will track you down. I will find you, I will fucking bury you. hahaha..

ANYWAYS!! Now that that's handled, I'm going back to sleep. Good night.

Camaro
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From ANON - Webtester01 on April 26, 2005
This gets more and more interesting. Goku is maturing quickly.

Vegeta will be in for quite a surprise when when Goku gets back to his dimention.

Keep it up.
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From ANON - Webtester01 on April 23, 2005
Ooh. The plot thiickens.

Keep it up.
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From ANON - Macha on April 23, 2005
*sing-song voice* I love this story!

Ah, thank you for the long expliantion at the beginning of this chapter. I was able to leave a whole lot of questions at the 'front door' and just read this chapter to enjoy it: and I did enjoy it!

hehe, seemed this Vegeta was getting a little cozy there. I am glad that he had a plan to quiet all the possible rumors that would have started with Goku just living in the castle.

MWuahahahahahahahha, at least I know there are at least 17 chapters to enjoy... and don't worry about me figuring stuff out.... lol, that certainly isn't going to happen.
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From ANON - kit-kit on April 23, 2005
ooh mystery mystery though i got a idea what if goku gets pregnant by vegeta and then returns to his time carrying the other vegeta kid i would think that would be so cool. if you have no problems with the idea maybe you could add it to your story and make a senquel.
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From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2005
I personally think that both Chrome, Camaro and Serenity are right. I don't care if things are alright between you and Camaro. You still shouldn't try and defend yourself to Chrome, she was just sticking up for a friend if you ask me. I don't know her and I don't know you but I would say that you have a hard time admitting when you're wrong. If you were really sorry, you would feel bad for what you'd done and take all the reprecussions that come with that. But you're not. You're still going after people who were just trying to protect a friend. Wouldn't you have done the same? No you probably wouldn't have. You don't seem like the type. But I don't think you're sorry at all. Your apology to everyone seems rude. You'll probably leave a mean message for me next time. I don't care. I didn't leave my email address because I don't think it's necessary to be sending rude emails to people over their opinions. But this is my opinion and that is that you need to stop pretending to be sorry if you're not. I don't think you would have responded to anyone but Camaro the way you did. You were harsh and rude and it was so unnecessary that it made my blood boil. Like Serenity says you need to stop worrying about who said it and worry about what they said. As far as Chrome is concerned, she was just as justified as anyone. She saw an injustice had been done, felt that something needed to be said, and said it. If you were sorry, you would have just taken it as punishment for your mistake. If you ask me, you're only sorry because you're afraid of what Camaro will do to you or something of that nature. Or what her friends will do. You can write in your stupid story about me if you want. That I don't mind my business, that I'm a coward for not leaving my email address or whatever you want to. But I don't care. You're beneath everyone if you can't admit when you were wrong and take what comes with that. You say you don't take orders, well fine, here is a request. If you're really sorry, be really sorry. But if you're just afraid and brown nosing then forget it. Chances are everyone will see through it anyways. You just strike me as a rude prideful person with no back up. You talk big but I'll bet you're just afraid. And your story is stupid. I only skimmed over it because of the reviews I'd seen. I don't think people who don't know english should write in it or at least not try and attack people who do speak it and accuse them of thing. Just a thought.
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From ANON - Serenity on April 22, 2005
GREAT GODS OF THE UNDERWORLD'S ASSHOLES!!!!! I can't believe that you were so harsh on Camaro! I know that you are usually a very nice girl who would never say something like that to someone unless you felt threatened. Camaro is one of those authors that people love to find reviews from as well as dread finding them. I have a good friend (your beta Vegeta's Mate) who cried when she found out that Camaro had left her a review before she had even seen what was written and as soon as she read it she cried again because the things that Camaro said were so nice and from the heart. You need to work on taking each review as it comes, not worrying about who left it but what they said.

Nice fic. Update soon.
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From ANON - ChromeApparition on April 19, 2005
Oh so your the one that was such a bitch. I thought so.
Look since camaro didn't tear your head off like she should
have I just want to tell you straight up, your a complete asshole
for what you said. I don't buy that --I'm foreign, I'm too
stupid to know what your saying-- bull crap either. That's just
a sad ploy to get people's attention off you for blatantly being a jerk.

You knew what she said wasn't trying to be rude. Believe me if Camaro
was being rude, you'd know it. You just probably wanted attention
like all the other sad people on this sight. You were probably just
trying to get her upset at you so that people would actually read your
boring shit. It's been done before. Your a liar and if I were you I'd delete
that thing you said because its only going to get people more pissed off
at you. There was nothing that camaro said that merited your response
I don't care how ignorant you are.

Any questions? Email me.

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From ANON - Macha on April 18, 2005
AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, EVIL CLIFF HANGER. I want to know what Vegeta's reaction is going to be. I also want to know if anyone who just happens to have a scouter on at that time is going to notice Goku's change.

LOL, I love the fact there are so many similarities to this verses Vegeta and Goku's own Vegeta. Makes the actual diffrences show up nicely.

Hmmmm, a flash back eh?
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From ANON - kit-kit on April 18, 2005
another great chapter i can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - geta_gfan on April 18, 2005
WOW
As I told you is a great story and every chapter makes me want to read more and more.Besides,I do believe you're a great writer.
~Update soon please~
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From ANON - Webtester01 on April 18, 2005
I like how this story is unfolding. Goku may be able to help them after all.
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From ANON - Sliding_pool on April 18, 2005
It cut me off for some reason. but i did want to say that I feel your note to Camaro was pretty rude. Maybe its because English isnt your first language or you have some sort of problem with her or what ever but i dont think that requesting to be emailed when an update comes is an attack on your or anything. People on this site know that getting a nice review from her is a compliment to their work and her asking you to put her on the updates list seemed to be extra special treatment. I dont mean to not mind my business but I wanted to say something from an outsiders opinion before their were any hard feelings. I dont think you were very fair to her though.

Other then that I liked the story. Please update soon.
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