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Reviews for Past To future

By : hibaakaiko
  • From Ryven-Firedancingsaiyan on July 21, 2013
    Good story Not what I'm used to since I usually go to Fanfiction.net the stuff there is tamer but it was still really good. The ending was a shocker I have to say though it was really good. I believe they call that a twist ending either way good job kept me going and reading all the way through despite being sick.
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  • From MasterofPie on May 08, 2008
    oh that was such a pretty chapter ^__^
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  • From MasterofPie on May 08, 2008
    poor Vegeta, though Goku is here it save him ...mwhahahaha ^__^
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  • From MasterofPie on May 08, 2008
    hahah the pink "bad man" shirt lives!!
    great chapter ^__^
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  • From MasterofPie on May 08, 2008
    haha i love the ending
    "oh FUCK..." priceless ^__^
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  • From MasterofPie on April 22, 2008
    poor Nappa
    ps. i like your fic ^__^
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  • From ANON - ebony on July 29, 2006
    i liked this fanfic. as a matter of fact i would put this down as one of the best ive ever read. i cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Wendyghost on February 10, 2006
    Wow! that was great no happy ending huh! Then write the sequel! pretty please~!
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  • From ANON - umm,... on January 25, 2006
    okay, i know every other can do whatever the poo they want with there storie, and everyones entitled to there own opinion and junk like that. But well, I just think you story would have been a nit better if you ended just a little bit different. I mean it could have still have been the incredibly evil ending you put it to,… but that was just,.. emoe as one could call it. An I think it sort of killed of your howl story. No offence though or any thing like that. Hope you have happy stories in the future. -Ja
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  • From ANON - Camaro on January 09, 2006
    Your story is interesting, but your spelling and grammer are bad. Your story could be better if you got a beta-reader. It's not hard to find one. But then again, you don't seem to want one. Well, you can post low quality stories on the net if you want, but yours could be better quality if you edited them first or at LEAST used spell check. Ah well... you got rude when someone tried to hepl you out earlier. I can't stand little bitches like you who are obviously very young and narrowminded enough to think that you don't need any help with your work. Oh yeah, you art is great.

    You know what? FUCK this resolution!

    You know what I can't stand Keiko? Bipolar bitches who review stupid shit they ought to be working on THEMSELVES! "your spelling and grammer are bad." Yeah hun, it'd be "grammar". ::rolls eyes::

    If Hiba doesn't fucking feel like paying so much attention to things like that (as YOU obviously don't "you art is great") than that's her business. I've always found that as long as it isn't tedious to read, that one should be paying more attention to the storyline itself rather than picking away at petty things in an attempt to bitch the author out later. If you're going to flame little twat, FLAME!

    Camaro

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  • From ANON - Tana on January 09, 2006
    I... I don't know what to say. That was one of the best DBZ stories I've ever read. Ever. But... but he ending was different. NOT what I was expecting- I thought they would just stay dead at the end. But, then again, I had a bad feeling that Vegeta would suffer again. The Death chapter was so sad- you made me cry! I hope you write more stuff like this, maybe an alternate ending, or a branch-off with the two kids? All in all, you're really great at writing, and I hope to read more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - Shalina on January 08, 2006
    Personally I think that Ending compleatly KICKED ASS to the major. Awsome plot twist got to love it. Still think you shuold writ some other fics peopls need more stroies that end like this I'm alsmot sick of happy endings.
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  • From ANON - keiko on January 08, 2006
    Your story is interesting, but your spelling and grammer are bad. Your story could be better if you got a beta-reader. It's not hard to find one. But then again, you don't seem to want one. Well, you can post low quality stories on the net if you want, but yours could be better quality if you edited them first or at LEAST used spell check. Ah well... you got rude when someone tried to hepl you out earlier. I can't stand little bitches like you who are obviously very young and narrowminded enough to think that you don't need any help with your work. Oh yeah, you art is great.
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on January 08, 2006
    Oh my god...only furiza could be beaten to a pulp, have his DICK
    ki-blasted
    off, be mashed into the ground and STILL be alive and walking!

    NOOOOOOO Raditzu! Don't go with the bad man! I had such a hard time
    beta-ing the latter parts of this...i got so caught up in the story
    that i
    forgot i was looking for grammer and stuff like that! Wow...amazing
    chapter! I actually almost cried when Goku-saa died! (that's a big
    reaction from me...i'm such an ice-queen...)

    I hope they're happy together in the afterlife! Maybe you should do a
    little happy chapter about them together...it would be nice...*sighs*

    Keep up the awesome writing!

    Hella ^_^ V

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  • From ANON - ANON on January 08, 2006
    i'm currently reading past to future and i'm on chapter 38 illness and i absolutely love the story i'm sorry that nobody pretty much reviewed if i had read this earlier i would have haelped be your muse,reviewed every chapter,and even beta test if i had to to get you to keep writing so yeah just thought i should tell you and thanks for writing such an awesome story
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