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Reviews for Past To future

By : hibaakaiko
  • From ANON - Person 517 on January 07, 2006
    I liked your story but I couldnt read the last chapter well. I strange letter things were the " ' , should be. I got stuff like this ¥. Could you like maybe reupload it? :)
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  • From ANON - random person on January 07, 2006
    just read the whole story from begining to end.... cried my eyes out several times. Amazingly writing piece of art, though you left me feeling utterly heartbroken for Geta at the end. * glomps vegeta and never lets go* *takes her freeza figure and tosses it in her toilet **flush** shouts: TAKE THAT YOU CHIBI RAPING LIZARD!* please don't let it end soooooo sad! of coarse it's up to you... sometime happy endings are over rated. BUT I SIMPLY LOVE THIS STORY TO MUCH FOR IT TO JUST END LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!! but anyway, i just wanted to let you know that this is an awesome story, very unque in everyway. Weither you do do more or not i shall remember this as one of my favourites *and i've read alot of dbz fanfiction*!

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  • From ANON - ~mnymph~ on January 07, 2006
    after all that?.... that f'n sucked. so this was really a frieza/veggie fic... how misleading... and what? what happened to vegeta's other child... the one carried by bulma? you misled your readers andleft a story full of holes...

    hope you're happy with yourself... you just lost this reader... because you chose a pat ending and didn't fill in the holes... I could have respected part of the ending, but you chose not to respect the reader...this just sucks!


    after all is said and done, what did you really accomplish? N-O-T-H-I-N-G! ~~ ABSOULUTELY NOTHING

    BIG WASTE OF TIME!


    WHAT A CROCK OF CRAP

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  • From ANON - Mihoshi on January 06, 2006
    WHAT IN THE HELL-HOLE WORLD IS WRONG WITH YOU????????
    I thought Goku and Vegeta were going to live happily ever after in Other World, but now........
    NOW THAT SCUMBAG OF A MONSTER HAD TO RUIN EVERYTHING!!!!
    ANOTHER CURSE I PLACE UPON YOUR HEAD.

    I know I sound mad and upset, that's the way I am when two people can't be together.

    Please, please, please don't let this be the end.
    I beg of you, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

    P.S I really love the story *hee hee*.
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  • From jamielee on January 06, 2006
    this is probably one of the best dragonball z fanfics i have read in ages love the story so far, I'm up to chapter fifteen and i love it look forward to reading the ending.
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  • From ANON - BlackTigerG2 on January 02, 2006
    That can't be the ending, can it?!! OMG, Napa and Raditzu are going to go with that monster? And what about Gohan and Toma? It was so sad, damn Furiza! You must continue, poor Goku and Vegeta! I felt myself almost start to cry. You truly are a gifted writer, and I will be waiting for your future stories. ::Gives Son Grin:: -BlackTigerG2
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  • From ANON - Frederikke on January 01, 2006
    WOW FUCKING EXCITING!!! YOU ONLY HAVE ONE PROBLEM NOW...YOU HAVE TO WRITE REEEAAAALLLYYY FAST FOR I WILL GO FUCKING CRACY IF I DON'T FIND AN UPDATE ON THIS SOON....IT'S THE ONLY YAOI I READ AND YOU KEEP BOOSTING MY INTERREST!!! I LIKE THE FACT THAT FRIEZA DIDN'T DIE AND TO BE HONEST I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN WITH NAPPA AND RADITZ ON FRIEZA'S SHIP...AND WHAT ABOUT THEIR BABY????
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  • From ANON - Mihoshi on January 01, 2006
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    IT'S NOT FAIR, IT'S NOT FAIR, IT'S NOT FAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    WHY DID THEY BOTH HAVE TO DIE, WHY WHY WHY WHY *cries uncontrollably* *sniff sniff*
    GOKU......VEGETA........THEIR BABY BOY *wails uncontrollably, pounding the ground*


    A CURSE I PLACE APON YOUR HEAD, MAY YOU FOREVER SUFFER IN DREAMS THE WAY THEY HAVE SUFFERED!!!!!!!
    AND DON'T GET ME STARTED ON WHAT'S GOING ON WITH RADITZ
    HE BETTER NOT BE A TRAITOR, OR YOU ARE SOOOOOOOOO DEAD, MISTER OR MISSY OR WHAT EVER YOU ARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Black Crystal on December 30, 2005
    you killed them *looks at hibaakaiko and weeps*
    can't they just get wished back with the dragon balls?? is this the end?? whats going to happen the gohan?? oh the uncertontiy!!!
    BC xx
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on December 30, 2005
    That was more like the nightmare before Christmas! Quite dark!

    I hope they find the daragonballs.
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  • From ANON - BlackTigerG2 on December 29, 2005
    More, more! I LOVE it! But I hate cliffhangers, you are goin' to continue right? I can't wait until the cubs are born! And is Frieza really on Earth? Oh no! Hurry Vegeta you gotta save ur mate!! Ur awesome! ::Gives Son Grin:: -BlackTigerG2
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  • From ANON - Black Crystal on December 29, 2005
    hey its me the non reviewer again just want to say that your still keeping me clueless as to what is going to happen next and i dieing and really not wanting to read at the same time - really don't want frieza to spoil the happy ness that he has created -hope you up date soon
    love BC xx
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on December 26, 2005
    EEEEEE! EEEEEE! NO!! BAD FRIEZA!!! NO!!

    heh...'Geta in the sex store was funny... I could so picture that... *smirks*

    Another awesome chapter and I"M FINALLY CAUGHT UP! YATTA! ^_^ V

    Keep up the awesome work and i'll TRY to review on time now k? Else you'll just get a big bunch like this! lol! Not that you mind i'm sure but still...

    Hellagoddess

    PS: Hope ya had a great xmas and got everything you wanted! I KNOW I DID! *winks and smirks* lmao!
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on December 26, 2005
    OH NO!!! SICK GOKU!! WAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!

    Bad leaf! BAD!! *slaps hand* Don't you make him die! By golly gosh i'll come over there and kick your ASS!! lol!

    Awww...it was such a sweet chapter too! Everyone was all happy and everything and then...and then...*cries* Poor, poor Goku!

    Great chapter though!

    Hellagoddess ^_^ V
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on December 26, 2005
    AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *rolls on floor laughing* POOR Vegeta! What a shitty day! No sex and TWO pregnancies!! *shakes head and wipes tears from eyes* oh god... this should be interesting...will everyone else find out about Bulma's? Cause it seems like everyone but 'Geta knows about Goku's... (which will piss Vegeta off to no end...*sighs*...)

    Great chapter yet again! *grins*

    Hellagoddess
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