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By : hibaakaiko
  • From ANON - malimillions on July 23, 2005
    Oh my goodness! Poor Vegeta..... Poor Radditzu!!!!!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 23, 2005
    aww that was a such a sad chapter but please continue! i can't wait to see what happens! i wonder what triggered that memory. ph anyway please continue and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 22, 2005
    i've been waiting for this update i liked this chpater goku and vegeta finally got together...physically at least, please continue and update soon!!!
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  • From Hellagoddess on July 20, 2005
    Woot! This is great! Glad you pointed out i should read it!

    Please continue!!! I loved them at the fair (Vegeta' so kawaii on rides, even when he's puking) and going shopping...heh heh

    Napa's a tiny bit scary but that just because i totally can't see him as being even a tiny bit attractive but that's my personal opinion... *grin* Bald guys scare me so... *cringe* and Napa's pretty bald...

    The Saiyago was a bit confusing as i have no printer and no scroll button but adds to the authenicity of it all... (Very sad about Ri'ce, awww...i felt so bad)

    Please update soon!!! EEEeeee!!! *squeals*

    Hellagoddess


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  • From ANON - jomaru on July 20, 2005
    in one of your chapters you seemed very upset. and you sould be, i love your writings and grammar, anyone that puts you down like that
    should die. keep up the good work and don't keep me waiting for the next chapter! ;)
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  • From chayron on July 19, 2005
    For some reason the story seems to be written by two different persons. The chapters, until Vegeta, Radditz and Nappa landed on Earth were wonderful. All the description/story of the young kidnapped prince and his guards/friends was just unbelievable; I just couldn’t tear away and was biting my fingernails while reading every word. That humiliation Frieza inflicted upon the prince, the filming of two nothing suspecting lovers [(I just loved how you described Radditz’s and Nappa’s relationship and love for each other. I usually don’t like Nappa; for me he associates with a bald dumb-head, but you made me love him. The bond and instincts were perfectly thought out and described. I loved the scene where Nappa was healing in regen. tank (after Zarbon raped Nappa), and Radditz was thinking about cleaning his wounds, liking them clean and staying close to his mate. It was just so intense!)].

    And after they three went to Earth it all started getting…well…dunno. It became just…strange. I understand that Vegeta have been tortured and is brainwashed, but hell…he was just pissing me off with that his constant indetermination toward Goku. He sort of fell in love with his Kakarott when he saw him the first time, but was hitting and slapping Kakarott all the time. Did he try to knock his love into Goku’s head or something (there was some lame excuse that he was doing that because he himself was being hit by Frieza all the time, but it’s just silly)? And Goku…for heaven’s sake…when did he become such a sissy? (Though he’s rehabilitating…). Descriptions of surroundings are still wonderful as they were in the first part of the story and the sex was really good, but for some reason…the story just got…strange. Though, the first part won my heart. Despite this strangeness in latter chapters, the story is a wonderful read.

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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 17, 2005
    Goooood.
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  • From ANON - bob on July 15, 2005
    ooh now what might vegeta have in his hands??? please update soon
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  • From ANON - bob on July 08, 2005
    ....whoa you're scary when yelling at flamers..... but yeah i luv your story and the updates are well worth the wait i luved the part in the chapter when raditz says goku is a retard that isn't worh vegeta's time, i couldn't stop laughing for about five minutes. oh and by the way that was an evil cliffhanger, update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 07, 2005
    Just to let you know, I am a lazy SMUCK and haven't been reviewing, and that will probably continue to be the case. I love this story, and so do several others, and I see you have the reveiws to keep you motivated in updates.

    You have an excellent story here, and just to let you know, I will probably continue to read this story without more than this one review.

    Excellent job, good charater developement, lol, excellent... foreplay. :)

    Macha
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  • From ANON - chibi_vegeta on July 07, 2005


    WAHAHAHAHA!!

    me? beta you?...ahm...*lips quirking*...no...I'm not interested in spending all my time in minute corrections...your spelling SUCKS...the story idea is good...but since you obviously don't want me to read it I'll be glad to just dump this fic and skip on to something else...

    and let me tell you something child, you'd better grow a thicker skin if you want any editor anywhere to so much as glance at your work...if I'd given you a real review you'd have blown a gasket...I _was_ trying to be nice...

    and no...I didn't bother to read this chapter, since your jolly little 'fuck off' killed any appetite I might have had for more...

    bottom line...learn to read, and write...




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  • From ANON - kittenqueen on July 06, 2005
    ah amour... lol the image of guku standing above vegeta and nibbling his nose in a sexy way will be stuck in my head, in fact, im going to draw it sooo any hooo...
    Update! cant wait for next chappie!
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  • From ANON - Shalina on July 03, 2005
    Awww poor Geta ^_^ LOVE your fics you simply MUST update soon REALLY i want to know what happens ^_^ Kepp up the awsome work darl and I shall forever read it.
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  • From ANON - bob on July 03, 2005
    yay! you updated and there's a little action going on here, i like how vegeta admires and insults goku at the same time its funny and actually kinda sweet. update soon!
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  • From ANON - the_mystic_banana on July 01, 2005
    *cheers wildly* YEAH!!!!! an update!!!!! Taken you long enough just to get to a little Goku staring @ getas ass... closer to a lemon. Wait, there is going to be a lemon, right? I think i will x_x if there's not....
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