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By : hibaakaiko
  • From ANON - Camaro on April 21, 2005
    Wow, REALLY good chapter! I was so impressed with how well developed Vegeta is as a character. Perhaps a bit OOC but then, what do we know? Maybe he cried a lot more than anyone ever figured. I for one don't know how he would have survived if he didn't. At first I was sure things would have turned out ok with him and the other Saiyan (Especially since I wasn't using your translator and was a tard thinking it was Kakarot) and when Vegeta killed him I quite audibly went "oh my God... no." it was so sad.

    Sheesh.. how bad would Vegeta feel? Good God! Anyways, great chapter. Really REALLY good!

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - db27 on April 20, 2005
    God, just when you almost get to where you left off, you are putting this on hold. Please just give me one NEW chapter to read.

    P.S. I really liked this chapter -- mainly because I've never seen another like it, and I love ORIGINAL, WELL WRITTEN stories. The only thing I didn't like was having to scroll down to see what the heck they were saying. But putting in a new language is making the story more realistic, and I respect you for that. Please reconsider and post one more chapter that I have not yet read. I would greatly appreciate it. I do wish that more people would review this story for you. Please keep writing for me.
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  • From ANON - AFicR on April 20, 2005
    Noooooooo...

    WHYYYYYYYYYYYY...? ~_~

    Don’t put it on the ‘burner’!! *shrieks*

    ...

    *sighs* ANOTHER hold-up!? By this rate... when will poor Vegeta meet with his baka?...

    *sniff, sniff... sniff*

    UPDAAAAATE!! *wails*

    !!_!!
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  • From ANON - nacho on April 19, 2005
    come on, update! its good so far, but vegeta sounds a little wussy (then again, hes seven) whens he gonna meet goku? When are they gonna grow up? DONT LEAVE US HANDING
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  • From ANON - Camaro on April 18, 2005
    Hmph... well, I still thinks it fucking ri-God-Damn-diculous you're whoring yourself out for a review number. But whatever. Here's your 14th. Just keep in mind, when you tell people what number you want, you get empty reviews that mean jack shit. When you let people review on their own, they do it because they want to and will give you more indepth opinions.


    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Darkvoid on April 17, 2005
    Good story so far..well told and an intersting way on how things could have developed in the DBZ universe. I am looking forward to the rest of it...kepp it coming
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  • From ANON - AFicR on April 17, 2005
    Update! UPDATE! UP-DA-TE!! ^O^

    Like I said before, I'll only have something to add when it gets to the last couple of chapters of the previous posting!

    *shues forward*

    ^ ^
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  • From ANON - Hitchhiker on April 17, 2005
    WAH!!! Oh this is so cruel! Poor Lil Vege. There are so many fics out there where Vegeta gets raped when he's young but you've really got the mental violation in there as well!
    Please continue, i really like the idea that Jeice is actually a nice guy, and i'm wondering when you're gonna have Goku appear? When you listed the ages at the beginning you
    said Goku's age was six to Vegeta's Seven, does that mean we're gonna meet the lil guy as a chibi?
    Can't wait to read the new chapter, though i'm half-dreading what you're gonna do to the saiyans next!
    HH
    p.s. I think you mean, "breeding" not "Breading". Breading conjures up images of baked goods. Hopefully not what you were going for.... o.O
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  • From ANON - Mya on April 17, 2005
    I'm glad you updated so fast. Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - caseyj0 on April 16, 2005
    Sorry I didn't review your story. I also read your story on fanfic.net until it disappeared so I already know what's going on so far. I do like your writing and love the whole Nappa/Radditz thing going on. Look forward to future chapters. I like how its so original and dark with Vegeta's past, that's how I think it should be.
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  • From ANON - Camaro on April 16, 2005
    hmph! Well, I never thought I'd see you stoop to this but oh well, I understand the pain of writing your ass off for something and seeing the hits number go up and your review number stay the same. It's rude and the reason I left Mediaminer. It isn't worth your time to write or to post it up if people are going to pretend it's not worth the time reviewing. So while I still think the whole "I want X number of reviews" thing is ridiculously beneath you (and pathetic to say the least) I do know where you're coming from. But do you know how excited I was when I saw "5 chapters" up? And then to see it was only an a/n!

    See! You know how rare it is for me to like things! I only reserve that for really interesting stories! So come on, update for me since I'm being very nice lately! :) oh, and send me an email sometime. I miss our conversation.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Mya on April 16, 2005
    I really do like your story! Please update!
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  • From ANON - AFicR on April 16, 2005

    Hi there! I followed this fic till it regretfully disappeared off the face of the net. It’s a GOOD fic. And maybe it hasn’t as many reviews it deserves due to the fact that by then the plot had already landed on the Earth’s greatest hero doorstep. Personally, I was waiting rather anxiously for the fic to get to that point... *whine*

    Well... but if it is reviews what is needed to get there, then by all means:

    A little hard-core but it only gives the more gist to those years under the lizard, and plenty of reasons for Vegeta’s ways.

    It’s simply awesome the way Raditzu and Napa are presented, contradicting the usual mad-dog/brainless look.

    The in-depth shown in the relationship between Vegeta, Raditzu and Napa and the glance to their emotions is amazing, something that most fics lack, adding to it the cultural quirks decently approached and highlighted, it sums to one of the best fics around.

    The few errors in the text are just not noteworthy while plundering through the lines.

    ^ ^

    I also have some down regards, few and minimal, but they mainly concern the last chapters in the first post before the vanishing act, and they could probably be thrown asunder by further chapters.

    Sooooo, PLEASE continue with the story! The fic is GREAT, REALLY!! But while I can re-read it to catch-up with the story, it’s not the same as BRAND NEW developments, AFTER the last post in the other archive.

    *puppy dog eyes*

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  • From ANON - Quaxo on April 15, 2005
    This is interesting... I'm sorry I haven't reviewed faithfully. I understand your pain. This story has been interesting so far, you seem to be setting up a very interesting psychological tactic with Vegeta, and I want to see more
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  • From ANON - dbz27 on April 14, 2005
    Don't you dare change a thing about your writing! You are one of the best writers here! Well-written chapter! Looking forward to more!
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