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Reviews for Metamorphosis Alpha

By : gokugirl
  • From ANON - XaloneXalwaysX on October 16, 2005
    Yeyz! This is super interesting! Can't wait for an update ^_^.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on October 09, 2005
    nice im sad to see the story end.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 18, 2005
    i love the chapter its about time a adventure comes along.
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  • From ANON - bob on July 18, 2005
    i've been waiting for this update! i luv this story and I like ur OC she seems tough.
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  • From ANON - bob on June 21, 2005
    I luved chapter 6, it was the funniest thing when Goku came in his pants. i really enjoyed the way chapter 6 turned out because I thought the beginning was funny and it wasn't all out angst.
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  • From ANON - Midnight on June 21, 2005
    Sorry I meant to say that your translations could be better, just stick to english
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  • From ANON - Midnight on June 21, 2005
    First of all i really like your story a lot...definitely continue, but you had one error that i see a lot in Manga/Anime fanfiction. " Ai shiteru" is not 'I Love You', I Love You is actually "Watashi/Boku Wa Anata O Aishitemasu" in proper japanese. But other wise the rest of your translations are correct as far as i know.

    Update Soon

    Midnight
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  • From ANON - Serenity on June 20, 2005
    update

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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 20, 2005
    great chapter i guess now vegeta is going to fuck goku to help him feel better.
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  • From ANON - bob on June 16, 2005
    I luve , your story and your writing style...I'm impatiently waiting for an update oh and I luv the quotes at the start of each chapter.
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on May 18, 2005
    I like this story very much. I can't wait to see what happens at this dinner party. Update again soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Lost Pink Angel on May 16, 2005
    I absolutley love this story. Keep up the excellent work. -MaL-
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on May 14, 2005
    great chapter i love pan and bura togerther i think they are so cute and i can't wait for goten and trunks to get togerther.
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  • From ANON - anon on May 09, 2005
    Not bad, but Vegeta's being kind of casual about the whole "Oh, I'm your mate now" thing, isn't he?

    Also, the bits of Japanese scattered throughout aren't doing your fic any good. They're distracting.

    A solid fic. I'm sure you're going to get better as time goes on!
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  • From ANON - Bluerossiette on April 26, 2005
    This story is awesome....... i love it , every chappie makes me excited and soooooooo want more. you are a great author and i can't wait to see what else you have in store.

    PS.
    I luv the little quote you have at the beginning of your story it makes my day to see wut it is.

    Luv Ya'll

    ~Bluerossiette~
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