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By : RenaSama
  • From ANON - chayron on November 23, 2005
    You know, this chapter left me frustrated. You left us where we started. Well...except that feeling that the roles are changing...

    That blush on Vegeta's face...and leaves...and an almost flustered Vegeta speeding home... Maybe I'm wrong but it feels like the tables are turning.
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  • From ANON - veggiefan2k4 on November 17, 2005
    This is great!!!!!! I love it. I was just wondering, are you the author who wrote 'Houseguest' A V/GK/B pairing fic. If so you are my idol. If not, you are my idol anyway. Your great and I havent read a story this good in a while.
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  • From Orchideater on November 17, 2005
    I see Chichi as a reader too! It seems like a way that she would spend her free time, and she pushed so many books on Gohan it shows she obviously put some value in them (okay they were textbooks, but there had to be literature in there too somewhere). She was likeable in this chapt and the last, the way she seemed shy and vulnerable and softened toward Goku. But with her fanatical religious views I don't envision her getting as kinky as Goku would like. Their interactions in ch 10 were sweet, and it was nice to see them starting to get along-- too bad there seems to be trouble on the horizon.
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  • From chayron on November 13, 2005
    Whoa. Loved it. But why I have a feeling that things are going to get messy again?

    And...does Goku really feels and thinks that he finally is going to the right direction or it's only his...hmm...sort of a desperate try to persuade himself that everything is going to be alright? After all all that "reunion with his wife" happened in such a short time...
    And in this case it seems that it was only Goku's fault that they couldn't communicate normaly... He makes some effort and everything just miraculously squares up, and Chichi and he seems to be like two lovebirds.

    Waiting for more!
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  • From ANON - Krya on November 13, 2005
    cliff hangers. fuckin eh. XD
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  • From ANON - GreenEyes276 on November 13, 2005
    All right an update!!!! Nice to see Goku and ChiChi are finally getting along! Vegeta calls him now. Why now and what for I wonder? Hmmm I cant wait for the next chappie! XD
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on November 12, 2005
    YEAH! You finally updated! Its about time!! Keep writing what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 12, 2005
    *Smiles happily* That was soooo sweet. I really loved watching the interaction between Goku and Chichi when there wasn't yelling involved. It made me happy to read it. And I am glad that when Chichi did show her interest, Goku knew to take it slow. Nice, *more smiling*

    But what is this? Vegeta is signalling Goku? Hmmm... *narrows eyes* What's going to happen?

    Yesh, it was a very evil cliff hanger to a rather sweet chapter.

    Thank you for updating!
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 12, 2005
    *poke* Just thought I'd put my two cents in and say I am SOOOOOO waiting for an update. I hope you have one planned for the near future.
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  • From ANON - Camaro on November 03, 2005
    I know I told you quite a few things that I liked on AIM but I did want to come over and leave a review since it's only a common courtesy that too many thankless pieces of shit on this website overlook. I find you've created such an erotic world here that it's hard to get back into reality and accept the fact that sex is still such a taboo in our world.

    Everything, every sentence, every word is sexual in this story yet transforms into so much emotion and meaning that it's often overwhelming. I find that while Chi chi is "hateable" in every since of the word, in this story, you also make her somewhat pitiable. In that, I feel the age old inclination to view Goku as sexually frustrated and selfish male. Every feeling (as I said earlier) generated by this story is either hot or ice cold.. there is no luke warm.

    Vegeta can be viewed as an overprotective male, yet also, a sexual predator in so many instances. Bulma, while possibly the most human of them all, is hard to grasp at times which makes her all that much more intriguing. Yeah, I think that's the best word. You've created these characters to be so intriguing that while the storyline is on its own addictive, the people you create are the drug itself.

    Please continue writing!

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - haha on September 26, 2005
    you tease us so why why ...and i love the story too =^6_6^= meow
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  • From ANON - Felix on September 25, 2005
    Oh, Rena. I promised to review, and I always put it off, and I almost ran off to bed again without leaving one behind. Wow. What can I say? It's such a dynamic story in many different ways. Then again, you have the lovely, diverse perspectives of all the characters meshed together in this superb drama that just exudes.. something. Something thrilling, something bitter-sweet, something that makes you crave more of it. If your fics were a drug, I'd be an addict, that's for certain. It's torturous - too - containing a mix of heavy eroticism and angst. 'Never quite sure the direction in which everything will take, but that's part of the joy of reading this story. I really tried to give you a better review than I have. If it wasn't sufficient I guess I'll have to try harder next time, haha. Keep up the most excellent work.
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  • From Robyn on September 24, 2005
    Oh My.... Well, I am certainly interested in seeing if Chichi comes through with her promise. She seemed a little shy or reticent about it.

    Now why can't I have dreams like that? Of course, I'd probably be in the same situation as Goku... nice dream... to bad it didn't go any where.

    I am so happy you updated, and I hope you won't take as long inbetween updates. This is an excellent story!!!
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on September 24, 2005
    K has some real issues!!! How frustrating for him!!! To want and not know what he wants ...and yet...want again!!!

    He's never had a blow job and now his so called wife wants him to wait?! I bet the 'itch is sleeping around!!!

    How sad for him...his mind is creating fantasy...a 'phantom couple' for him to play with...

    Wet dreams is all he has... ....and as the song goes.....

    "Just my imagination...once again...running away with me....it was just my imgi-na-ation runnin' away with me"
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on September 24, 2005

    Wow. Intense. Goku's frustrations and convictions warring with one another.


    And Chichi finally relents! Things between them can only get better from here on out....or do they? ;-)


    I look forward to your next update.


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