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By : RenaSama
  • From ANON - ~anz~ on August 23, 2005
    Like moths to a flame...moths to a flame... The question is: who is the moth? and who is the flame?

    The stakes, now, are higher... who succombs first? Vegeta definitely knows how to fuel the fire...and stoke the flames.... Need. Want. Desire. It now haunts his dreams.

    The observer now becomes the observed.... stoke the flames..... Desire.... want.... need.....
    putting out fire....with... g a s o l i n e!!!
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  • From Orchideater on August 22, 2005
    Fantastic chapter (ch 8)! I really have to wonder how much more Goku can take without losing his mind. I keep expecting him to have a total mental breakdown any second now– though he’s already sort of begun that, hasn’t he, by half-losing awareness in their bedroom and disobeying Vegeta in the first place. The fight in the last chapter was certainly unexpected (though not really, when you think about it). Vegeta has got to be the masochist of all masochists, if he enjoys even getting his bones broken by Goku in a fight. Well, with Saiyans everything is more extreme, I guess! Also it seemed a sudden and refreshing change for B and V to be looking at Goku in a new way, as if the light had been turned on the moment he took the risk of “tasting,” and now they are forced to see him as a sexual person. Previously in the bedroom, when he was only watching, they (well, moreso with Bulma) seemed to only consider him like another accessory to their kink– the voyeur element. That was a gorgeous lemon at the end, btw. I am as far from being a BV fan as you can get, but for some reason that particular lemon just really appealed to me. Wonderful sensory descriptions.^^
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 22, 2005
    Interessing...

    I wonder what Bulma will think when she finds out.
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  • From ANON - Xero Sky on August 21, 2005
    Gorgeous, tense, and erotic as hell.

    As usual!

    I keep waiting for one of them to break. Okay, eagerly anticipating it might be a better description. So hot, and yet the guys haven't really touched each other much yet. *sighs*


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  • From ANON - Macha on August 21, 2005
    YAY, you updated. :)

    Ah, I sort of wish Goku could find continued satisfaction in his boring life. Of course, then there wouldn't be many lemons or possibly even a reason to continue this story, ne? I get the feeling this isn't finished between Vegeta and Goku, even if it is just Goku unable to restrain himself. I guess the whole 'plot' depends on where he decides to go with his future.

    Excellent lemons, limes and foreplay, as usual.
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on August 21, 2005
    O.o Intense...I like it! More soon, please!
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  • From chayron on August 21, 2005
    Ah…just pure skill. I almost was begging Vegeta to allow Goku to participate in their fun.

    Goku is obsessed with them. Though, I still wonder if he has preferences.

    Actually I feel sorry for Goku. He has no control over his life right now – all he can hope is that Vegeta will overcome his possessive borders and will let him in.

    Wonderful chapter as usual!

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  • From ANON - Lauren on August 08, 2005
    Very good. I love it. This isn't the end, right? Another question . . . when does the yaoi come in? Update soon!
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on July 30, 2005
    I need a cigerette. Or ten. Jaysus.
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on July 28, 2005
    wow...i knew it would have to come to a head sooner or later...Nice touching moment there at the end lol...I can see how goku would get all angry (i would!)

    Really like this fiction...so much that i've added it to my Reccomended reading, along with Bejiita Unattached

    You're such an awesome writer and i love ALL your stuff! Keep updating! I'd even pay you if i had the money to spare! lmao!
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 27, 2005
    While I am sad that the story had to go so far between Bulma and Vegeta for the truth to finally come out, I am so fucking relieved that those two have finally figured out what's on eachother's minds. *Happy sigh*

    Excellent chapter. Good indepth thought processes.

    Update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - SammO on July 27, 2005
    I believe I didn't spell dieing right....

    well I'm from holland, and remember the botlle of wine and the time, okay??

    theeheeee, I'm annoying myself!!!:D
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  • From ANON - SammO on July 27, 2005
    Oh, God!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Really I can't! I'm dieing here!!! please I want the lemon and I want it now!!! who's gonna be uke? I prefer Vegeta! That is, if there is going to be a lemon. I really hope so, anyways, I already had a bottle of wine and it's waaaaaaay across my bedtime... so don't mind my weird review....

    Just update really, REALLY fast! I'm dieing here!!!!!! Whatever, I really love your story so far!!!! keep it up!

    Love SammO
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on July 27, 2005

    WOW!


    What a paradox!!!!


    WOW!
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  • From chayron on July 27, 2005
    Whoa. Two idiots. Like always – first fight then think *shaker her head*

    So…it’s really funny. Both bloody, both sweaty and both aroused. Is going to be a lemon in the next chapter or Vegeta is going to be a stubborn asshole again?

    The chapters was angsty and horny - my favorite combination. Loved it!
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