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By : RenaSama
  • From Orchideater on July 22, 2005
    Thanks for your email, Rena! I think I see the fic a lot more clearly now.^^
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  • From ANON - Veggie\'s Slave on July 21, 2005
    Pleeeeeaaaaassseee! Write more!
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  • From Orchideater on July 21, 2005
    The ultra-conservative Christian churchgoing seems very AU for the DBZ universe, but I suppose it could happen. The story is well-written (proper spelling, yes!), your erotic scenes are top-notch as usual, and the angsty psychological insights and growth from Goku are well-done and captivating. But... I'm sorry, but I just cannot help thinking that Bulma and Vegeta are *total assholes* in this fic. They let Goku stay there all that time, basically flaunting their mad sex life to him when they know how Chichi is and they have to see how deprived and horny and desperate he is, and then they expect him to just sit there with his hands to himself and never want to join in. It seems extremely cruel, or else extremely thick-headed on their parts. But maybe it's all part of a master plan to bring him to them... or something? o.O Also, as a Goku fan, the entire "Vegeta is the ultimate sex god meant to be worshipped and envied and Goku is a pathetic ignorant dope who grovels in his inferiority" theme that has been done so much by Vegeta fans is extremely tiresome. Please don't think I'm trying to flame or to be a bitch here-- I love your fiction work, your doujin work, and your other art work-- it's just that this particular fic kind of sticks in my craw. Maybe I'm being too judgmental too early (I tend to do that sometimes *sweatdrops*). I look forward to seeing how you will continue this fic. From Bulma's comment "I love being the only one who can make him look that way," I get the feeling that she doesn't plan on sharing.^^
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  • From ANON - anz on July 21, 2005
    Talk about `dejavu! Goku felt exactly as I did while attending church....psalm singing, tambourine whackers...to quote juge roy bean: 'there's nothing worse than reformed whores!'

    So becoming a mikquetoast is Goku's way of doing pennance!? [What skeletons are in YOUR closet, ChiChi?]

    He is not going to Vegeta on his own....his fall from grace...his loss of innocence...he's being pushed--from behind!!

    Wifey's not takin' care of business...[hey ChiChi, tcsddeo!?]

    What price ignorance...*ahem*...innocence

    He has finally crossed the line...flaunting the fact by hanging around ...

    anytime now he will be a willing participant....

    ....GERONIMO!!!....
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  • From ANON - Greeneyes276 on July 21, 2005
    Im dying. Youre killing me here! GAH poor Goku!!! Someone PLEASE give the man the relief he so rightly deserves!! Heehehe loved the scene where he licked Bulmas fingers clean. I wait for the next chappie. XD
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 20, 2005
    Okay, If I were in Goku's postion, I'd have already gone insane by now. I know exactly what he meant when he thought it was a blessing and a curse. I think I'd be sliding down the curse side of the hill at the moment.

    OH, still so hot! *grins*
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  • From ANON - Good on July 20, 2005
    Good job! That was hot! Let Goku join in with Bulma and Vegeta soon. That would be soooooo hot!!!
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on July 20, 2005
    *gasp* Is Goku kissing Bulma?? Ohhh...he might get a blowjob... O.O *doesn't really expect it* Such a good chapter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - chayron on July 20, 2005
    Soo...is Vegeta jealous about Bulma or he's a bit afraid and uneasy about those 'strange' affection signs that Goku is showing towards his ass and sperm? I wonder, I wonder... But having in mind how Vegeta loves that vibrator, he shouldn't be...hmm...reserved toward his Kakarott. They all could make such a nice bundle.

    I just love how Goku is being pulled deeper and deeper.

    A wonderful chapter!
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  • From chayron on June 28, 2005
    Ah, another amazing work. It's interesting, smart and sharp. The place where Goku tells Bulma after oral sex that it's not polite talking with one's mouth full is brilliant. And the place where Goku says where has he learned reading from...ingenious.
    Goku's mind and cravings developement, his planning, putting so much thoughts and effort to plan his show sheddule...aww...fun to read.
    Sure Goku would like sex and food idea.
    And Nimbus. Poor Goku, because of his obsession, he lost his pet.

    Soo...Goku tries to sate his thirst for Vegeta using Chichi. And at the same time feels proud that he learned something from watching Vegeta and Bulma. whoa, Goku.

    Eagerly waiting for more!
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  • From Hellagoddess on June 25, 2005
    Just have to tell you that i think this is the absolute best G/V/B fic i have ever read! You HAVE to finish it! ^-^v
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  • From ANON - gege-mun on June 22, 2005
    xD love the story so far goku's cheating thougths on either veg or bulma xD i like the atmospher of this story to really gets me in the feel of the characters xD goood jooob rena!!
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on June 22, 2005
    *twitch* Ehhhhhhh! Chichi and Gokuu het! *cries*

    Oooh...Bejiita...his ass... *snicker*

    Go hump HIM Gokuu! HIM! T_T
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 22, 2005
    Eep...... OMG how embarassing.

    And with that said, I have to wonder what the invention is.

    And at the moment, I'm not too concerned about Sunday. I am more concerned if Chichi is still alive. O.O

    Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - GreenEyes276 on June 22, 2005
    O_____O

    HAHAHA!! Poor Goten!! Hes probably out back somewhere rubbing his eyes with dirt. XD Great chappie! Poor frustrated Goku. ChiChi should appreciate what she has instead of bitching so damn much. More please!! ^_^
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