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By : RenaSama
  • From ANON - anz on June 22, 2005
    Excellent...kakarots distress...and subsequent ...release, very well done. One can see his "fall from grace" or voyage of discovery...quite plainly. The twists and turns of his journey are masterfully done. Telling Goten to get lost was priceless. It's about time he let Chichi know who wore the pants in that family! He should 'smack that ass' more often!

    Bravo!!!
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  • From ANON - jc on June 14, 2005
    GREAT FIC ANYMORE CUMING
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on June 12, 2005
    oh my. how wonderfully mind fucking this thing is. how wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 11, 2005
    One more thing. I found Goku's thoughts about whether or not he would still be able to ride the nimbus very astute. *nods* I've wondered how long it would take for someone to bring that up in a story. Glad to see it was you.
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on June 11, 2005
    Awwww...poor Gokuu...I mean...it's bad enough he isn't gettin any..but he feels so bad about it... *hugs him*

    I loved Bejiita's reaction to him eating the banana though! ;)

    More soon, please ^^
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on June 11, 2005
    I'm actually starting to feel sorry for Goku. He is so much on the outside looking in, seeing a relationship he doesn't have. Even if (when) he participates, how can he truly fit in. He sounds very needy and lonely, willing to accept watching since he doesn't really have anything else.

    Is Vegeta aware of this? Is he doing it on purpose to demonstrate his power over Goku? Or is he just trying to get Goku to feel relaxed enough to join in. I don't see Goku gaining confidence, just desperation.

    Vegeta's clothing seems to be an armor or shield - when it is gone his is more himself. Interesting that he is willing to let Goku see that part of him - either he no longer sees him as a threat, or has found this method to defeat or control him.

    Can't wait for the next installment. *g*
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 10, 2005
    While not the usual frantic lemon pace of the rest of this story, I still loved this chapter. Thank you for sharing a different sort of view of these... two. I had to get adjusted to it just like Goku did. :D

    Update soon please!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 06, 2005
    I can only think of one other story I have done this to....


    When you gonna update??? huh, Huh, HUH????


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  • From ANON - Johnnyjosh on May 28, 2005
    O.O Wow! I love this! The sex is so hot! *leers* I also love the way you've portrayed the characters. I kinda felt bad for him when he tried to put what he'd 'learned' into practice though *snickers* poor guy! Keep up the great work!
    JJ
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  • From ANON - who? on May 20, 2005
    When will you come out with another chapter? Will Goku ever get to participate? Will he ever get a blowjob?
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on May 18, 2005
    UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!

    Please! This is an EVIL cliffhanger!!!
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  • From ANON - Macha on May 17, 2005
    Sorry, this is going to be a short review.

    Poor Goku having to go to church with Chichi...... sooooo boring.

    *drools* What exactly are Bulma and Vegeta up to having Goku over so often? I think we'd all like to know. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Macha on May 05, 2005
    HOT HOT HOT...... I LOVE this story. *drools* I know I should be thinking about Goku's reactions and Vegeta's 'control'.... but I can't think about anything but the lemons and limes (and now cherries... hehe) Ah... so good. *purrs*

    I certainly hope this continues. MWuahahahahahhaha... Steamy.

    Now this is the proper sort of evil story. *grins* So kinky. Now, if you want to know the difference between kinky and perverted, I guess you'll just have to email me.
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on May 05, 2005
    I read this from the link you left at dA *drools more* Hope there's G/V or V/G action soon! :D
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  • From ANON - Camaro on April 26, 2005
    As sexy as this is, it's also hilariously funny and personal. I love it so far. I almost cried laughing when Goku says "chi chi always says it's not polite to talk with your mouth full" and when he comments on how it's probably the wittiest thing he's ever said. It's just awesome. I also like how empowered you made Bulma, not just the tiny, innocent little girl that naughty Vegeta corrupts with his demeaning sexual positions but an actual STRONG sexual person who does what she wants and goes for what she needs. That is SOO COOL!

    I'm usually not into the whole pwp.. but this isn't exactly one of those anyways. It's very sexy yet interesting to me. And the sex is of course very creative, almost to the point of an artform.

    In fact, you've written this SO well and SO personal, it's like we're feeling what Goku feels. Turned on of course! haahha but also EMBARRASSED, ashamed! It's great so far. Good job! Really gets a reaction out of me.

    Camaro
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