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Reviews for Trials Vol.2: The Gray Sky\'s Revenge

By : sweetsatincocoa
  • From LadyAlexiel on April 27, 2009
    Please E-mail me at flclanimefanatic@yahoo.com when you get some new chapters in! this story is great!
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on January 26, 2007
    I liked this :X Very nicely done, you are a talented writer
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  • From ANON - D/H on November 16, 2005
    What's up with you and 'CHEAP' profanity?? I don't understand why you have too have it in every single chapter plus almost every single paragrahp..I mean, i don't mind that there's prefanity USED in fanfiction but at least, try to make them 'TASTEFUL' and 'TACTFUL,' not sooo like yours!!!!

    Are you Mexican, i'm assuming you are, judging by the why you write...

    Anyway, your story is good but less on the profanity or try to make them classier not sooo..ummm...


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  • From ANON - Mia on July 27, 2005
    pleaz update pleaz!!!!!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on May 31, 2005
    Alright --> Al just may get his bod back! 8-)

    BTW - great story so far...
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  • From ANON - Mia on May 30, 2005
    NO CLIFFY!
    *bashes Cliffy*
    Evil cliffy but good chapter love it!
    *clings to*
    More please must read!
    -Mia
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  • From ANON - Mia on May 27, 2005
    Don't work yourself to death!
    *nod*
    Bu new chappies YAY!
    *nose twitch*
    Do update soon!
    -Mia
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  • From ANON - Mia on May 19, 2005
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
    PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mia on May 14, 2005
    Please update!!!!
    I must read more!!!!!!
    *clings to ficcy*
    -Mia
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  • From ANON - Pink Panda on May 06, 2005
    *bows* It seems that you and Rein/RealRoyMustang are like the only -real- true blue devoted writers on this site. And I admire it a lot!

    This story is very originl and the first one was amazing! You have excellent talent and I look forwrd to readding more.


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  • From ANON - FullMetalYaoi(too kewl to sign in) on May 05, 2005
    *Edward raises his hand and follows her* "Oooh.." *Edo smirks at Roy* "Heh...baka Taisa..."

    banana phone....that song is Hughes song I swear....

    ringringringringringrignrignring banana phone!!
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  • From ANON - sweetsatincocoa(too sexy to sign in) on May 05, 2005
    *Gives RealRoyMustang some sugar and sits in his lap* I know Maes was a knife-fighter, but a swordsman seemed more honorable, more interesting, and gave him more credit since we don't see his technique in the anime as much as we see the alchemists. I wanted to give him some props, and also explain why Elysia was so good at such an early age. Thank all of you for reviewing and enjoying this crap that I'm writing. *Hops off Roy's lap* If you guys want some liquor, then follow me!!!


    ~Cocoa~
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  • From ANON - RealRoyMustang on May 04, 2005
    Love the story so far but the late GREAT Maes Hughes was an expert KNIFE-fighter not swordsman (although I am pretty sure he'd know what to do if you put a Matsumoto katana in his hands...!) Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - FullMetalYaoi(too lazy to sign in) on May 04, 2005
    Hmm....Scar and Elysia...... That has to be one of the most oddest couples I have ever heard of....lol.... but hey, to each their own...*nodnod* Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on May 01, 2005
    This is shaping up to be a good sequel. 8-)

    I saw #25 last night too. *Very* sad. 8-(
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