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Reviews for Denial

By : priscel
  • From ANON - Anya on January 29, 2006
    uuuuuu, poor Quin..... But is he going to take an unwilling Duo again?? If so, you're evil!!!
    Still I'm glad that other pilots will appear soon. I really was wondering which would be the eventual pairing.
    Good luck & please update soon,
    Hugs
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  • From ANON - Anya on January 12, 2006
    Did I tell you that I'm in love with you???? Maybe I did....
    I LOVE YOUR STORY - I just read at mediaminer that it was your first attempt to write fics, MAN, what it would be like if you continue!!!! Your style is very captivating and the plot!!!!!!!!!! very thrilling and just simply brilliant.
    Still, just one suggestion - Rasmus is good, but I think HIM's "Vampire Heart" or "Killing Loneliness" would suit Duo more - though this is just an opinion.
    Hope you'd write another chapter soon.
    Hugs

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  • From ANON - Anya on December 29, 2005
    I love it more and more!!!! Very interesting!!! Still, are they gonna be adults any time soon???
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  • From ANON - Anya on November 24, 2005
    And I crav to find out what's next!!!
    Hi!! Just wanted to say - really great and interesting story!!! Hope Duo would remain the main character till the end and that Quin would reappear again (don't blame me - I like the bastard)
    Have a nice day & lotsa chocolates!!
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  • From ANON - ralphiere on July 28, 2005
    I'm surprised that this fic doesn't have more reviews - it's coming along nicely and really has potential. The backstory was interesting, although I do admit that the POV switch and the flow were a bit hard to follow at times, but despite that it was well done. Your character development was wonderful, and I look forward to see what happens next. I hope you intend to follow up with Solo as much as Duo, for you've created great characters for both of them. Keep up with this one - I look forward to reading more.

    ~Su
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  • From ANON - hametor on June 02, 2005
    yay you updated ,love the please keep going
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  • From ANON - Alex on May 23, 2005
    The second chapter is much better than the first. You did a good job of keeping the POV in the same person (ie-first person, second person, third person.). I'm really enjoying your characters and the shades of drug abuse that is going on.

    There are a couple of rough spots, like mis-spelled words and a few things that could be tightened up. Perhaps you should consider a Beta to help iron out the rough spots. I know from experience that it's really difficult to see the problems in your own writing because you know what you were trying to say.

    Can't wait to see more from you!
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  • From ANON - yukio on May 19, 2005
    It's hard to review because of the content of the story ,
    but i will be the first to review ,
    I like it ,its differnt & sad but good character development
    I like the story
    so please keep with it
    and how many chapters do you have for it
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