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By : mistryl
  • From ANON - J.S. on June 07, 2005
    im bk...i still ave tests but i gave myself a break

    so many lemons...*drools*

    keep da gud work up....mayb i should revise 4 my german now

    Tschuss



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  • From ANON - Starwarrior on June 06, 2005
    *grins* I love that! It was... I dunno I what I can say for it, but it was interesting. Though, maybe you could... Nevermind, just make juice it up a little bit, I dunno, but it seem to me it was missing something. Not sure what, but keep up the good work! Oh! By the way... Um... are you a chick or a guy? I read the reviews and saw couple of people calling you dude, and some people call you a girl... so um... what are ya?
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 06, 2005
    i wouldn't mind playing a game like that with rei or tyson
    great chapter as usual keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on June 06, 2005
    This is getting really good. That was a good idea, in the arcade I mean. I'm trying to get my story out, but at mo, I've got a writer's block. Typical huh? Lol. Looking forward to seeing more.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on June 02, 2005
    MORE! That was a great chapter. Looking forward to the next one. Hope Tyson doesn't get anymore rashes. Lol.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 01, 2005
    amazing job a usual
    waiting to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Starwarrior on May 30, 2005
    I read your lemons, and actually when I see the titles on the first page, I kinda except the fic to be what the title says, not some random lemon, though your work is good, but has no strucure, I think I'm saying this right. Though I do get things mix up. You should look at your titles, and try make the lemon of the title, because many fics do that, there is rarely any fics, I read, that have that. And course, you have those authors, who don't put up Titles, but titles for chapters are like short summeries. They tell what's going to happen in the Chapter, now for your chapter 15, since you did the cross dressing thingy... well maybe you can use that again, and a suggestion for 16, have ray or Tyson pretend to be a teacher, or have them in a class or something. Anyway, there just suggests, you don't have to take them if you don't want to, and for your lil friend on loving tiger! Keep support her dudette! That fic rocks! Can't wait for ur next update!

    Starwarrior
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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 29, 2005
    haha great chapter keep it up
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  • From ANON - foreign_t0ra on May 29, 2005
    I LOVE YOU....because TyRe is so rare these days ;o; And you have supplied my TyRe-hungry heart with much TyRe goodness. It...it makes me...melt and drool and...;o;

    I am so happy.

    The sexiness of these lemons are just so thrilling. And I love how you make both Takao and Rei seme, instead of having just one of them do all the work.

    Keep it up, please
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on May 29, 2005
    That was a real cool chapter. Mind you, I am a real sucker for TyRa. Looking forward to reading more soon.
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  • From ANON - Ghost cheeth on May 29, 2005
    WASSS UP! Dude, I so love your storys! This one was kinky! UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - J.S. on May 28, 2005
    yay
    another rei and tyson lemon
    ....neva gets old

    i got exams coming up so i cant read any more of ur hot and steamy lemons 4 3 weeks *sniff sniff*


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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 27, 2005
    thats a lot of chapters ur putting up kool. loved this chapter kinda kinky but it works for me so
    keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on May 27, 2005
    Woah. Talk about a place to get naughty. Wonder if someone would get away with that these days. Lol. That was a really cool chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on May 27, 2005
    Oooh, talk about rough. Typical of Kai to like it that way. Good chapter. This is getting really cool. More Tyra though. Lol. Love it. Looking forward to reading more.
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