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Reviews for The Third Rule

By : VelvetMace
  • From YoukaiObsessed on May 15, 2005
    OMG!! That was hilarious and hot as hell!! Really good on the dialog, just absolutely loved this whole chapter. Good job!!
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  • From ANON - Asidian on May 15, 2005
    Hooooly hell! *cracking up*

    You are -fantastic-! I've never read a fic that was so dirty that had me -laughing- so hard before. The last line- ohhh, the last line. XD

    *cheers loudly* I -adore- the fact that the seduction was on Ed's terms, too- and the eventual compromise so that they both get their kinks. And that Roy teases the hell out of him. If you continue with this fic- more of -that- would be fun. ^^
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  • From ANON - RealRoyMustang on May 15, 2005
    Funny as hell! LOL! Ed in a schoolgirl outfit and discoveringhis own kink at the end? way cool!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2005
    *Is in throes of laughter*

    You characterize Ed so well. XD
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 14, 2005
    *cracks up* OMG, that ending was sooooooo funny!!! ^___~ Very clever idea -- I really enjoyed this fic a lot! I can totally see Ed coming up with rules for his sex life, lol. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2005
    LOL, I love this ^_^ can't wait to read the next part. And those rules... *snickers* so funny. Keep up the good work.

    may
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  • From ANON - Ri on May 13, 2005
    Ooooo kinky. XD I like it! It is very amusing . I want to read Ed's Kinky idea! Please add chapter! Other then that I loved it! Keep it going. ^^
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