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Reviews for The Third Rule

By : VelvetMace
  • From ANON - vtsfy on October 09, 2005
    *mindless zombie* Moooooore......
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  • From ANON - mmmslash on July 09, 2005
    I loved that! So HOT! And thank you, by the way, for ending it with a nice bit of tenderness. That was beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2005
    It seemed incredibly fitting and realistic. Please do continue this. I especially appreciate how your writing style and story content is over the top with dramatics or flowery talk that one usually associates with romance novels and too often fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - clarechan on June 29, 2005
    Wowzas! Completely HOT! My roommate rejoices that you have discovered your inner pervert. I rejoice that you have written such wonderful Ed/Roy Roy/Ed! *contented sigh* So could we assume from this fic that Roy has something for Ed that is more than sexual? I'd believe that. Ed should mellow a bit and enjoy. But anyway--just my musings on the Ed & Roy relationship. Please write more! I will look forward to it!
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  • From Moonwing on June 11, 2005
    Ok, I read this story about three days ago and I'm just reviewing now, why? Because every time I even /think/ about this stroy I turn into a convulsive pile of laughter!!! Very well written, really. I just don't think Ed would be that forward his first time, even if he had been reading porn for a week. (I was the one who sent the art, too, btw, just so you know.) I was able to draw if before writing about ! I'm not sure if I should be ashamed of that or not....
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  • From ANON - roriko on June 03, 2005
    OMG u updated! *blubbering tears of joy* I really hope you will continue to write this... esp Al, or threesopme.... *perverted giggle* I love love love love ur writing style and characterization. Al was the most pleasant surprise, ever. I don't think anyone ever portrayed Al to be that way but u managed to capture him in a convincing manner... omg I'm babbling am I? *hails you anyway* I hope you'll update the other two fics too tho... *sheepish* I kinda like ur Al more... and poor Roy! >_
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  • From ANON - Mauz on June 01, 2005
    Verrry nice! Teenage boys make crappy lovers - just ask teenage girls! I'm glad Roy has some patience. A gay male friend of mine says "Who cares if a sixteen year old can do it ten times a night if it only lasts two minutes a time?" On to more smut!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2005
    I REALLY hope that you continue this.
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on May 30, 2005
    HOT. Damn hot. Please for the love of all things holy, write MORE!
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  • From ANON - Xiaolang\'s Ying Fa on May 29, 2005
    You know those things that are just so damn adorable that make you just cock your head to the side hold your hands to your face, sigh and go 'aww.....'? That was one of those moments. You're a damn good author, you know that? Holy shit. That was awesome, but i think you might have added a bit of plot whether you intened to or not. Now, Roy seems like he WANTS a romantic relationship with Edward. So...i suppose its your choice to let him have it or not...(I recommed you do!^^) Anyways, please update soon! I really adore this fic even more now that they had a sweet moment! And i absolutely love the fact that Edward was reading up on the porn! ^^ *snicker*

    Love,
    Xiaolang's Ying Fa

    PS, the sex was to die for! ^^
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  • From ANON - Juna on May 29, 2005
    More more! that was deliciously fun. Fun in the tub. Oh yeah that is what I call bath time. Okay I am a dork. =P
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  • From Yamima on May 29, 2005
    Ooh what happens next? Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ashes on May 28, 2005
    This has officially become my favorite FMA fic. Hell, I think it might by my favorite fic ever! Rarely do I read something that has me not only giggling like a drunken hyena, but also doing so consistently throughout the whole story.
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  • From DixieRiley on May 19, 2005
    My dear, I love this!

    You have kept FUN in the naughty and that Elric boy is pretty damned IN CHARACTER! This is an extraordinary feat, which I'm sure you know. Your writing has rhythm to it, it is punctuated (and I don't just mean the grammar, heh,) and it is entirely clever. [I also include Marigold in this praise.] You have me chomping at the bit to see the much coveted '3/3'!

    If you have other writing - Please post, or link to its location in your profile!
    If you don't have other writing... for heaven's sake, keep writing! We all need a little giggle in our pool of attempted angst and meaning. [I insist, though, that comedians have the more poignant understanding of drama, having experienced much of it to arrive at the final destination of 'funny', so I'd be thrilled to read your meaningful angsty angst meaning drama drama *bongo*.] I'm on my knees - honestly; this chair is very uncomfortable, and quite a bit too short for the desk - 'I want some more, sir'. ;)
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  • From ANON - Homunculus on May 17, 2005
    Dear sweet elder gods that was hilarious! Truely the funniest thing I have ever read in terms of yaoi. Will there be a second chapter? I really hope so. This is just too amusing!
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