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Reviews for Marigold

By : VelvetMace
  • From ANON - TreeStar on September 08, 2006
    Hi!
    I've never left a review on this site before, so i hope i'm doing this right. I LOVE your trilogy. I'm not a Roy fan, and still the way that you have handled each of the three situations (roy with one and then the other and then both) is brilliant to me. Al's character was captured very well. Oh, i wanted to let you know something neat that not many people are aware of if they've only watched the anime and movie, because they are not the same story as the manga at all, but when Al does get back his original body, it hasn't grown much more than Ed's, and since they share a mind link (Ed has been eating and sleeping and excercising and masturbating for two bodies, basically, because Al's soul is connected by Ed's blood) and the two never really grow up. Like they're father (who is NOT Envy's father. different being, but look-alike), they will live for a LONG time because they aren't quite human, and they age and grow VERY slowly because of it. The author of the manga almost sued for the movie because it messed up her plot so bad (mechas can't travel through the Gate, and Ed didn't grow that much). Al actually comes out of the Gate at 14 years old, and smaller than his brother is in the manga. the author never intended for him to grow more than an inch past his brother, ever. neat, huh? they always stay small! it's cute. especially in potential to stories like these where Al is SO uke. anyway, i rambled forever.

    I love how you made Al so sensitive in this, and how his personality is pretty spot on. i'm surprised he didn't cry more over losing his brother, though. but this isn't a drama, it's a sexfic, and a great one. nice safeword, btw. loved that part. and how Al used it at the end of the last chapter. fantastically written, too. your storytelling ability along with great grammar really make this fun to read over and over again!
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  • From ANON - skydark on November 17, 2005
    you are, without doubt, a god.
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  • From ANON - maya on October 15, 2005
    You totally fail at making abuse of power and sexual abuse sexy and arousing.
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  • From ANON - Elric Maxwell on August 23, 2005
    Well, these two fics definitely meet my seal of approval! ^_^ I really like Marigold, with good ol' perv Roy taking advantage of poor Al. Did I say that I loved it? hee hee... The way you were descibing everything just had me grinning in perverseness. Great fic! EM
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  • From ANON - erika on August 18, 2005
    great story! keep it going!
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  • From ANON - neko!182 on July 01, 2005
    this is my favorite of the 3 stories, I neve thougt roy/al could be good, but.. HELL IT WAS GREAT!!! ajaja!! I need more!!
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  • From ANON - erika on June 21, 2005
    great story! please continue!
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  • From ANON - roriko on June 20, 2005
    YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!! *bounces up and down screaming* Lol I actually check this section daily waiting for your updates ^^;;; *hurries off to read drooling*
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  • From ANON - Ashes on May 28, 2005
    Again, much giggling. Though not in nearly as much volume and velocity.
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  • From ANON - crazy novelist-san on May 27, 2005
    this is the first ever RoyAl fic ive read... I plan to now correct that mistake. i didn't think that pairing would work but the novelist gladly admits defeat. *bows* I applaude you. as does Kitsune, who is currently miffed that someone is better then her at slash fics.
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  • From ANON - Asidian on May 17, 2005
    Holy hell. *grin* Holy -hell-. First The Third Rule and then this. Your fics are witty, and well-written, and -dirty-. I'm holding my breath for the third part, and keeping my fingers crossed that Roy manages to work out his little scenario at the end, after all. ^__^
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 17, 2005
    Once again, a wonderful fic with an excellent ending!!! ^___^ Oh, I do so hope that the third part of this is a threesome -- I was actually going ot suggest it, but I see that great minds think alike. ^___~ I can't wait for the last instalment to your "smutfest" -- keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2005
    Holy cow. XD That was fun. And very clever.
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  • From ANON - roriko on May 16, 2005
    *A* Eeeeeeeeee I love you! I love ur writing style and u manage to weave out a great fanfic while keeping everyone in character... I can't wait for part 3 *_*
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on May 16, 2005
    Another good one. Loved the whole chase and conquer part of it. Again the dialog was wonderful, and the story was hot!! Good job!!
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