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Reviews for Roy\'s Turn

By : VelvetMace
  • From ANON - bunnicle on May 03, 2009
    This story is fucking awesome! I'll admit I wasn't too into it in the beginning but then it just kept getting better. I truely hope for an update.
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  • From Banimal on April 04, 2007
    Very funny and entertaining to read. I don't know why but I find that Ed/Al is the hottest thing in the world. I hope that one day there will be a third chapter because Roy just HAS to get whats coming to him. :-D

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Fluffy on November 19, 2006
    Well well, that was delicious!
    Fufufu... cookies, indeed.
    Take this as a collective review for all three.
    And thank goodness for vocabulary. I actually blinked when Ed said 'tryst'.
    The actual use of words in fanfiction is sadly lacking these days.
    Anyway, thank you muchly! *chu*
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  • From ANON - mica / Shyara on September 27, 2006
    WOW! This series of three fics has made me very happy. You delve nicely into thier psyches, stay nicely away from the romance (much to Mustang's chagrin), and stay nicely in character. And the sexy descriptions are yifftastic! :D I really like the first one the very best, I like two angry chars fighting for control :) I *ESPECAILLY* like Ed's "Rules", esp #1. To quote one of the first (and WORST) pron fics I ever read "Just because I fucked you doesn't mean I love you." *EG* Although, I think Roy wouldn't have as much of a problem if he would just taunt Ed that he(roy) can say hard longer. Ed seems like the type who likes a challenge.
    As for the end of the 3 fics in all, wow. Al's pissed. I would think the torture he'd come up for with his brother would be refusing to talk to him/agnolage him. I'm a loud violent type, and my friend mandy pisses me off royally when she does that. It makes me so mad (which makes me yell at her, which makes her angrier at me, which makes her clam up more, which makes me even madder, which makes me yell at her and the cycle continue) I can imagine if I was stuck in the same house as her (and if we were involved in *that* way) the tension would be terrible. And I can see Al doing that... those quiet ones are the type that hold a grudge forever. Gah! *rolls eyes* anyway... I sure hope that there's at least one more chapter... Roy still has an unresolved issue.

    ooohhh write more! and feel free to contact me :)

    ~Mica
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  • From Vanne on January 24, 2006
    ADD TO IT!!!! UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdate! Please update! It's too lovely. What else does Roy have in mind?!
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  • From ANON - Itaika Ichimori on December 25, 2005
    I can get a kick out of the kink but damn Roy's and ass!! This review is going to be a bit of ConCrit so don't be offended or nothing. I can see Roy as an Ass. Infact I think you've spelled out his character the best out of all the Fanfiction I've read. Al is most definitely going to be a touch sensitive person in bed and Ed, well he'd be a pain in the ass just like you've got him now. But with Roy's musing's on the Incest thing I hope that wont com einto action to quickly. Knowing Ed he'll put up protest even if it is half hearted. In fact I think the only thing that would end the protest entirely is if Al either begged him or it hurt his brother. DON'T GET MAD!! -eeps- People get so pissed when I say things about how a chara would react in a cannon fashion. TT_TT

    ~Chi
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  • From ANON - Tashasaphi on December 09, 2005
    Eee enjoying this. Elricest... it has my by the collar XD it's so wrong but so goood.

    Are there going to be further chapters? I hope sooo!!!

    Awaiting more, or rereading what she's got.

    Tsx
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  • From Momoirousagi on October 26, 2005
    wow! That was amazing! Really good job! ^^ There definitely aren't enough EdxAlxRoy stories out there, but this one is the best I've ever read! ;)
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  • From ANON - fullmetalyoai on October 25, 2005
    I love you so much! that was just great!!!
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  • From Vanne on October 19, 2005
    C'MON!!!!!! ANOTHER CHAPTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - vtsfy on October 15, 2005
    *pouts* Please, I want some more! o.o *drool*
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2005
    cha! omg that was so damned sexy.
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  • From ANON - BLD on October 10, 2005
    Splendid pleaze write more more more pleaze
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  • From ANON - Naria on October 09, 2005
    Otay...it's taken me a while to actually review cuz I wanted to read the trilogy together! WOW!! I simply can't get enough of your writing style! It's sweet, yet so damn sarcastic and HILARIOUS! ^_^ I need you to continue the story...Really! I MUST know if Roy wins the boys over or not!!! MUST!! KNOOOOOWWWW!! NOOOOOWWWWW!!!! So that means you shoulkd do it...=_= My will commands thee...PLEASE?!
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  • From ANON - The Yaoi Mistress on September 09, 2005
    oh my god! i just read the trilogy, your stories have a "i dont kown" that i like, is that just the end or will have a second chapter? this muct have a second chapter, but anyway, i like the story (both).

    see you
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