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Reviews for Roy\'s Turn

By : VelvetMace
  • From ANON - Lady Sinistra(Too lazy to sign in) on May 21, 2005
    Wow, what a wonderful way to end a three-part story. It was cute, in it's own kinky way, but I loved it. I can't wait to see more from you.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 21, 2005
    Yay!!! OMG, that was great!!! ^___^ I loved this "trilogy" -- feel free to write a "follow-up fic", too, lol!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Ebony on May 21, 2005
    oooooh, please, please more, please this is really good, I want to see how the month ends and if ed and al keep going at it, and if they move in with roy. and and, please write more
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  • From ANON - Asidian on May 21, 2005
    You are... astounding. This... *grin* This is -fantastic-.

    I love how Roy cuts away their defenses, and I absolutely adore that Ed's reason for protesting that he can't do anything with Al is because he loves him. The first kiss in the entryway is adorable- especially Al giggling- and I freaking -adore- how mean they both were to Ed during Chutes and Ladders.

    And this line... was hilarious. And fun, and all-around -great:
    "'I thought this was punishment,' said Al with a naughty grin.

    This was going to be a REALLY good month."

    *happy sigh*
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  • From ANON - realroymustang on May 21, 2005
    Elricest AND Roy there too enjoying it as well! W00t!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2005
    Well hot dawg! I'm happy to see a conclusion to your three-parter. Very enjoyable. I only wish there was more. There's just something about the three of them together. ^^

    You might want to fix the formatting, though. At the beginning and end there's a block of unreadable characters that end up making the formatting too wide to read on screen. Had to paste it into a new window.
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  • From ANON - roriko on May 21, 2005
    *A* OMG u updated! *runs around in circles screaming with joy* I love ur writing... I really, really hope you will come up with more soon... it's so hard to find good FMA fics... and to me urs is the one of the very few best ;_;
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