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Reviews for One Turn Around

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  • From ANON - Liah on August 24, 2005
    hey interesting story...love it...lets hope that they dont have to be poisened eh? lol

    Liah xx
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  • From ANON - Serebii Faerii on August 15, 2005
    EEEEK!!! I can't believe my review is…two days late?! [X.x];; Gomen nasai! *bows in apology* But…the plot is thickening! XD I admit, I can't quite see the plot just yet, though… [^-^];;

    Aw…*blushes* I was very happy to help! I'm glad you both appreciate it! [~^-^~] And…I'm a little hyper right now…otherwise I'd give more compliments to your superb fic, but I can't think of the right words! [>.
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  • From ANON - Kerianya on August 15, 2005
    Incredible. the plot is so addictive and i am intrigued to find out how the story will pan out. I beg you to continue.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on August 14, 2005
    This is a great story. Hope there won't be too much blood spilt. Looking forward to finding out what happens. You've certainly caught my attention with this. Hope to see an update.
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  • From ANON - Kailover on August 14, 2005
    Really good story. Loved it. Is this story gonna be a Kai/Tyson pairing? Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and plz continue soon
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  • From ANON - May on August 06, 2005
    Ah, I always want to read a story like this, especially with yaoi pairings ^^
    I just want to know about the pairings...cuz I don't want to have high hope then realize that the pairing is the one I don't like.
    Good work and I am looking forward to the next chapter~
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  • From Kisaki on July 12, 2005
    Aww! The first chapter is good!!!! I love it! Please update soon! Its great! So i guess Tyson is the one who can control the winds right?? Thats so cool!
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  • From ANON - Sharon on June 11, 2005
    That's all good but who are the couples might telling us in the next one or do we have to make up so fore you? lol. jk. but good luck on this one I can see Chaos rising in the next one now I can see there faces win they find out, Kai, Rei, Takao, and Max become freinds oh boy that if that happens it might not but it's going to be up to you now.
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  • From ANON - Starwarrior on June 06, 2005
    Damn! I like that! Anyway, your style is great and I love how the plot is going! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 04, 2005
    wow that was an amazing first chapter great very interesting fic keep up the good work
    can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Serebii Faerii on June 04, 2005
    O.O I desire to apologize in advance for my almost-ranting review. Please forgive me, as I am a grammer freak. ^^;;

    X3 The plot you have unveiled sounds spectacular! Though, I can't figure out if this will be TyKa (or KaiTy --;;) or ReiKai (or KaiRei --;;). It sounds and looks like ReiKai/KaiRei, but I am a big fan of TyKa. XD But I also enjoy ReiKai!

    However, I do wish to point a few things out. The title link for the story is spelled wrong…I think you may have typed it in too fast. ^^;; Also, phoenix is spelled wrong in your summary, but it is spelled correctly within the story. Oo;; "Drigger" is actually spelled Driger (I made this mistake as well, but subtitles on the TV are a definate plus when writing fanfiction ^-~). And is Tsar referring to the Russian word "Czar"? oO;; Because Czar means "Caesar" in Russian… Err, and I think "Judie" should be Judy. That is how the name is commonly spelled. I have never seen it as Judie O.O.

    Also, are you guys using the Japanese names? I noticed Hilary is Hiromi and Tyson is Takao and so on and so forth. X3 I do know that the dubbed version got screwed up with names when they turned Boris into "Bryan" and Balkov into "Boris". --;; If you are, and if I may be of some assistence…Lee's name is Rai (some people use Lei or Lai, but it is Rai --;;), Enrique is Giancarlo, Tala is Yuriy (YES, there is a 'y' at the end of his name. "yuri" refers to f/f pairings --;;), Bryan is Boris, Boris is Balkov, and Ian is Ivan. Also, Dizzi/Dizzara does not exist in the Japanese version, but you can still use her! X3 Besides, I like Dizzi, though, if you two have been watching G-Rev, you will notice that Dizzi is no longer present in Kenny's/Kyouju's computer. XDDD

    O.O Holy cow…I think this is my longest review ever…I'm so sorry for taking up so much space! @.@ I hope the two of you can forgive me for my chasm-ness of constructive criticism…if this even is constructive critisism…

    X3 I really did enjoy the first chapter! This has so many possibilities! And I hope you will update soon! ^-^ So…

    ¡ACTUALIZA SU CUENTO PRONTO, POR FAVOR! XD (again, I hope you can forgive me for my HUMONGO review O.O)
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