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Reviews for Green Eyed Monster

By : Mija
  • From ANON - BLD on October 15, 2005
    i wanna know what will happen next.*on hands and knees* please please write more. i loved it
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  • From ANON - SagaciousSprite on October 01, 2005
    Hi

    I hope everything is ok with you and that the only reason you have not updated in a long while is becasue maybe you reached a writer's block. I actually have been following this story as you updated and tend to check back every few days to see if a new chapter has gone up. Since you last out 15 up.....many more people have been reading it. So just want to let you know that you story is awesome and hot at the same time. Alot of people usually get to the sex real quick, which is good for a PWP that i enjoy at times, but sometimes I want a really good chapter long story. This is one of them. So keep up the great work and hope all is well. Some people may be complaining that its taking to long for Roy and Ed to have sex but if they read to chapter 15 and not get fed up around chapter 5 then you must be doing something right. Ignore them because they can just go find themselves a PWP then if they can't stand the wait. Woo.....i wrote alot. But just showing a fellow writer some love.
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  • From ANON - fury on September 16, 2005
    this is just... aweful. i love your inuyasha/yyh crossover fic, but this one is just... terrible!!! you've turned ed into a flaming rent boy... he's soooo out of character he might as well be shuichi from gravitation. what the were you thinking? plus, you ship this as a roy/ed fic, and there hasn't been ANY roy/ed in fifteen chapters!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on September 05, 2005
    @_@...where's the rest?

    You've drawn me so into this story, and then I go to read on and...nothing. So please, update soon...because I want more.
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  • From ANON - shin mao on August 24, 2005
    i love this!! plz continue soon!!! roy should bed ed soon!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Mila on August 23, 2005
    Hey! This fanfiction is just TOO HOT!! *drooling all over my computer*
    Loved this sexy Ed! I just think he is a little too convinced... maybe roy should put him on the line... =p~
    Loving your story so far! Very well writen! Just update soon, please! LOV YA! ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2005
    wow!!! great fic!!! damn it sure is hot with ed n roy aint itlol just started reading the fic to a while to catch up on the chapt but im glad i read it all the sex was awsome good of u to shoe both side wit ed i cant wait till roy gets him or ed end up fuck roy lol updated soon ill b waiting
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  • From Sirenia on August 16, 2005
    love the story
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  • From EmbersEye on August 15, 2005
    You always seem to be just too good at cliffhangers! Please update before I simply die of curiosity over here!
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  • From EmbersEye on August 15, 2005
    If anyone wants to shoot you for the maid-Ed in Roy's office chapter, I'll kill 'em first. I'mnot complaining, don't be so harsh on yourself. :)
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  • From ANON - DemonMistress546 on August 14, 2005
    I really liked the Roy/Ed banter in this chapter, very in character and very funny. Now I only have to figure out how the white box will come into play... ^_^
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on August 13, 2005
    Not bad, Ed being a little ass again, hehe. More please? *puppy eyes*

    Rock on
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2005
    ho ho, I really liked this new chappie ^_^ i find it much more interesting when there is teasing and seduction and anticipation. Please, write more soon. I'm starting to pity poor Mustang. Not really, it is way too nice to see him suffer. Mwahahaa!
    Ahem...Anyways, I'm really looking forward on reading more of your fantastic story. Update soon! Great work!
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  • From ANON - Ciel on August 13, 2005
    I see its getting on! YAY! i wanna see royxed goodness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Riyoko on August 13, 2005
    Weee I liked it, oh man I just love how you make Roy and Ed go at it with one another the way the insult and all. Heh. Anyways good chapter as usual! I cannot wait to find out how Roy will get Ed in bed. Weee! Anyways take your time, and I hope everything goes well for you. Till next one ya?
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