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Reviews for Green Eyed Monster

By : Mija
  • From ANON - ^-^ on August 11, 2005
    Please contine!
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  • From ANON - lain on August 11, 2005
    OOOOO SO GOOOOOOOD! WRITE MORE SOON! I CANT WAIT TO SEE MUSTANG AND EDWARD ACTION! ::bites in hankerchief:: >.
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  • From ANON - chebbi on August 11, 2005
    ......it is an intersting storyplot but there are alot of typos.(Misspelling and typs are a bit of a pet peeve; no judgement) Plus the rankings after Colonel is Brigadeer General, then Fuhrer, much appreciated. Please note this is not a flame but veery constructive criticism.
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  • From ANON - Tesgrua on August 10, 2005
    That was so funny with Roy getting punched! The only difference between him and Miroku is Miroku gets slapped, Roy gets punched. LOL!
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  • From ANON - Li on August 08, 2005
    That was the BEST FMA story I've ever read!!!!!!! I did like how you had Ed have a go at more than one gender to. It appeals to all of the senses. I think you should have Ed have sex with Russell again and have Roy catch them, and then they all have a threesome. That would be cool.
    Update soon!

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  • From ANON - Ri on August 04, 2005
    I want the Roy and Ed smexy goodness! XD Anyways good chapter, I am not much of a guy/girl thing but I guess it was well written. Sorry I am so much with the guy/guy action. XD BUt I still love this story. Well I cannot wait for the Roy and Ed flirty goodness! Keep them coming. ^^
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  • From ANON - DemonMistress on August 04, 2005
    I'm actually commenting on all of this story at once, since I didn't want to stop in between chapters. ^_^ I really enjoyed the whole story, and it's nice to see a Roy/Ed plot where they don't immediately jump into bed together. I prefer your style, having them build up the tension for awhile. I also like how you've portrayed both Ed and Roy, as you've given a lot of thought to each of them. All in all, I really love this story and can't wait to see more!

    If you're still looking for a beta, I can help for a couple of weeks or however long you need. I have WordPerfect for Windows, so I don't know if that would be a problem if you have another word processor.
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  • From ANON - puffin on August 04, 2005
    I'm so glad you updated this story and so fast. Keep it up and update when you can.
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  • From Madrona on August 03, 2005
    Yeah, more chapters.
    Actually, I think you have Hughes pretty well figured out. I agree that while he wouldn't actually hurt HURT Roy, I do think he might give him a pounding. He's not above slapping him around for his own good ( think EP. 25). I also go with the interruptation that Hughes goes from goofy to serious in a heartbeat. That's his way. He pretends to be a screwball. It makes people less on guard when they are being chatty around him.
    I'm looking forward to more.
    Have you pimped this on LJ yet?
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  • From ANON - KT on August 03, 2005
    ok the story is getting drawn out to much i want some love.... lol it great so far but if ya keep it up without some lovin i might start to cry lol :P
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on August 02, 2005
    Yay! Updates! More please? *puppy eyes*

    Rock on!
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  • From ANON - iamallycat on August 01, 2005
    Awww Maes is a sweet heart caring for Ed like that *Glomps him* Anyways I bet Roy is going to use that box of goodies!!!!!! XD He is that depressed! Or I am being sick. =P
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  • From ANON - puffin on August 01, 2005
    I'm glad you updated. I like how this one is turning out. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kenz on August 01, 2005
    well keep it up its good ^.^
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  • From ANON - Kenz on July 30, 2005
    oh do continue thsi turnign out to be very intresting.
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