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By : Mija
  • From ANON - W.A on July 11, 2005
    That was a sweet chapter. Poor Ed trying to fit in...I love how you made this last chapter. Very sweet. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep them coming.
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  • From ANON - puffin on July 10, 2005
    Oh wow what a sweet chapter. Please keep it up and update when you can. Thanks for letting me know you update.
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  • From EmbersEye on July 10, 2005
    Well, after reading the author's note I understood why you wrote the chapter in the first place. It sends a good message, but by the end it was truly reaching cheesy proportions. The grammar was fairly awful, lol, just being honest. I can't wait for your next chapter. Mustang is in for one Hell of a day, especially with you orchestrating it all (meant as a compliment). 'Till next time.
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  • From ANON - Huro on July 04, 2005
    Hi,
    From Ch 2:(Can Anyone please tell me if its Farman or Falman and who the heck is he really? is he the silver spikey haired guy? and who is Breda? and whats the name of the guy who helps Ross bodyguard the Elric brothers?)

    1. Vato Falman pronounced Watteau Farman; notice in Anime some names spelled with l's are pronounced like r's (example: Kirara from InuYasha pronounced Kilala)
    2. He is; A warrant officer under Hughes and Later under Mustang. Checks out the train to see if there are any suspicious people on it. Quickly sees Al and goes psycho. (Many Episodes)
    3. Yes he does have silver spikey hair.
    4. Heymans Breda Second Lieutenant, a bit chubby, afraid of dogs, ally to Mustang (Many Episodes)
    5. Denny Brosh - Military Person conected to Ross. Looks after Ed and Al for a while with Ross.

    Hope that helps a bit. I like finding stuff out ;)
    Great story so far!

    Huro


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  • From on July 02, 2005
    GS here. Oh. you sooo need to continue this.... *drools*
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  • From ANON - puffin on July 01, 2005
    I am so loving this story. Keep it up and and update when you can.
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  • From ANON - Shingo on July 01, 2005
    I love it! It's so wonderful! hheee hee I'm going to draw Edo in a maids outfit now.....
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  • From ANON - iamally on June 30, 2005
    Ah! I wanna know what will happen next! Please update soon. Mmmmm Ed in a maid outfit what a sexy image. *Drools* Great job in this chapter ^^ Riza is sweet. That is very sweet of her caring like that for Ed. Ahhhh she is so mommy like! Great job! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - senko09 on June 29, 2005
    I feel embarresed for ed. when i see a image of ed in that i can't stop laghing. don't stop there keep going
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  • From ANON - Death on June 29, 2005
    I still love your fanfic. I hope you can magickly(that's how I spell it) pull the next one out of a hat so I don't have to but I know that's not going to happen. Oh well, I guess I'll to be patient. I hate being patient.
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  • From ANON - Death on June 28, 2005
    I love it. You must update soon or else I shall find you, rip off your arm, and shove it up your ass. Anyone can use that comment if they want to, it's not copywrited. Just don't say you came up with it. I'm serious about the threat too. *Closet door slams open and evil monkey points at Mija. o.O* Thanks.
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  • From ANON - aspiker on June 28, 2005
    Pretty good! The twist you've taken with Ed being the cock of the walk and Roy being unsure is refreshing --> it is something not seen in FMA fics. I hope that you will continue in this mode, Ed being the sure, dominate and Roy being the dominate yet submissive.

    BTW - the AU feel of the story is good too. The characters are spot on, believable and well fleshed out. 8-) Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - puffin on June 28, 2005
    Oh I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up and update soon. When you do update please email me at erinthacker@comcast.net

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  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on June 28, 2005
    Oh so cool! Ed in a maid outfit. I have a pic like that! If you want it just tell me or give me your e-mail so I can send it to you. It's pretty hot ~_^. Till next update! Ja ne! ^__^
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  • From ANON - juna on June 28, 2005
    Ah Ed is going to be in a maid oufit! So hot! ^_____^ Anyways I can't wait for the next chapter. Great jjob!! I am so loving this story. Weeee!!
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