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Reviews for Green Eyed Monster

By : Mija
  • From ANON - Riyoko on June 26, 2005
    Even thought there was no lemon and it was short I still liked it. Can't wait to read more!!!!
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  • From ANON - AZNkitsune on June 25, 2005
    UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! I don't see alot of FMA fics with Russel so I love this fic. I love the way you made older Ed! Yay! Your right about the Jealous Roy. It makes things fun. Update Soon! Ja!!!
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  • From ANON - W.A on June 23, 2005
    Absolutely love! I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job delicious and uh well i can't wait until it gets even more tastier. XD Okay I think i'm just hungry. Anyways great job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2005
    Woo hoo! Go Ed! I really like this ficlit so far and hope that u update soon.
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy Eared (not signed in) on June 09, 2005
    gotta say, I'm lovin' the dialogue...and the images of Ed's ass in leather pants. Hmm... (studying mental picture) no wonder it's so popular. I cannot wait to see this develop. Heads up, though, it's spelled "their" and not "thier."
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  • From ANON - MonkeyGurL on June 07, 2005
    I love it, please update soon! I hope russel comes out more, I think he was pretty cool!
    Can't wait till ur next update, hope it's soon

    (^_^)
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  • From ANON - Athena on June 07, 2005
    I agree with BWinner. a beta will help tremedously with your spelling and grammar, as will a program with spellcheck, such as MS Word. I am also a not-so-busy beta, so I'd be more than happy to help you with this story, along with any others you're doing at the moment.

    otherwise, this is a great story. keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Cidsa on June 05, 2005
    Pretty good :3
    However, there are definetly some descrepancies since you haven't seen the entire series..I won't spoil anything at all, but you may want to revise a bit once you see it all :3

    Also, if you cried at episode 25...be prepared for the last 11 episodes or so. :P

    For the things I can say without spoiling horribly..(Be aware though)
    1) Winry/Ed probably wouldn't work. They are way too close to being siblings...XD
    2) Ed loses his watch forever at one point (Won't say how heh)
    3) Ed also leaves the military before the series is over, around episode 42 I think (Can't remember exactly)

    I won't say anything more buuut, see the rest and then take a look at this again :3
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  • From ANON - Ri on June 05, 2005
    Update update! I like it alot. I like how you made the older Ed. ^^ So hot can't wait for the smex! the smex!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2005
    The title of the fic made me read this and it was worth of reading!

    Your first try at yaoi-fics? Good luck with that! I know how you feel
    when I wrote my first yaoi-fic. In fact, the same happened to me
    with Omi Tsukiyono from Weiss Kreuz. =3 (I'feel like writing a FMA
    yaoi myself soon.)

    So far so good. You're doing great job with this! I love how
    Edward's being a bit of a "slut" and such a flirt with Russell
    (whoever he is... I haven't seen him yet). Look out for the
    green-eyed monster! XD (Hey, wait a min. *I* got green
    eyes! o_o Eep!) Anyway, keep on writing this fic! Don't give up!


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  • From Yamima on June 05, 2005
    Update soon! Please!
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  • From ANON - BWinner(Not signed in) on June 05, 2005
    Well, your grammar needs a bit of work my friend...You have many missing apostrophes and such that you may want to fix up... Perhaps find yourself a good BETA, that's a good first step. Other than that I LOVE where you are taking this! It is hillaious, and I can't wait to see how you get Roy and Ed to hook up!

    PS. If you don't want to kill me for the BETA suggestion, I am one and would be more than happy to help you. all you have to do is e-mail me and we can set things up.
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  • From Mija on June 05, 2005
    To Saya thank you soo much for helping me with the chain of command thing..I feel silly now, lol, but I went back and corrected it thank you again so much for your help, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Saya Aensland on June 05, 2005
    The ranks go: Major -> Lieutenant Colonel -> Colonel -> Brigadier General -> Major General -> Lieutenant General -> General -> Fuhrer

    So, General is about as high as you can get without being the Fuhrer himself, and Brigadier General is only one rank above Colonel.
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