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Reviews for Trunks\' Discovery

By : Hellagoddess
  • From ANON - Melissa on September 07, 2006
    Love this fic, and anyone of your 'Sword of Action'-universe fics. Much like the last scene with Vegeta yelling at poor Trunks, LOL.
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  • From ANON - Niiro Yuuyake on June 14, 2006
    lol. Loved it. Especially the last part. Poor Vegeta..maybe he should borrow Trunks' sword...great fic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2005
    nice man
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  • From ANON - Raven Potter-Snape on July 25, 2005
    Mmmm, yummy. Loved this one also. It's very hot. Great imagery.
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  • From ANON - Blu on July 02, 2005
    ::ultra blush::

    ::squeals::

    .......so nasty! ^^

    Blu
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  • From Siarra on June 26, 2005
    Heh, this was every bit as good as I dared to expect. Unfortunately (or fortunately, depends on one's point of view, I guess) I didn't read the first version of this so I can't comment on the better or not factor but I can definitely say that your style has improved from "Sword of Action". I liked that very much, too, but this one is definitely a winner. The build-up is absolutely great, moving from a nice morning moment to a delicious display of kinkiness. It was very well written, the text had a good flow to it and was enjoyable to read but what I liked most was the fact that it managed to give off the feeling a true prequel, giving all the right details naturally so that it didn't bother me that I knew beforehand how this one basically went. Cheers.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2005
    I liked it, apart from the fact that he needed lubricant to masturbate... sounds like something is wrong there. I think it would have been better if you left that out, as it makes the scene unrealistic and quite disturbing, which was not needed and only seems to spoil it - for me at least. However, it is well written, despite this. I enjoyed the humour that you included, and it gave a good edge to what you were trying to achieve.
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  • From ANON - StapleKitten on June 21, 2005
    It was pretty good but i agree with ur self there was something missing. But I don't know what it was. . . maybe more climax or somethin' like intensity. Who knows u will have lots more time to write more at least!
    *Peace*Love*Happiness* Lots of luck and sexxxy yaoi kisses!
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