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Reviews for Objection

By : ABoxFullOfSharpObjects
  • From IuvenesL on March 09, 2009
    This one needs an mpreg warning.
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  • From Zofo on April 01, 2008
    This is so funny, I lost count at the many times I laughed out load.

    Goku is adorable, so much like the anime, he acts so clueless yet with a purpose. Loved him being a guard dog, so possessive and determined, and reasoning in his mind that he was the best match for Vegeta, although Yuri could try, he would stop at nothing get his prince.

    Poor Vegeta, just give in to Goku, you know you want to :-) His mutterings after Goku left through the window had me in stitches.

    So glad you are continuing this.
    xxx
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  • From topbear1974 on March 31, 2008
    this is an excellent story. Very innovative. I like the dialogues between kaka and veggie. you really kept their character. I cannot wait to read more. Please update soon!!!!
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  • From CrimsonTide on March 31, 2008
    I'm not a fan of an uke Vegeta or a seme Goku, but I still had to compliment you on your Vegeta. I LOVE you characterization of him and his wit. I laughed on several different occassions when he spewed his insults and made snarky comments.
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  • From Julesie on March 31, 2008
    Oh, I'm so glad you updated this story. I remember reading it ages ago on here and was saddened to see it hadn't been updated in awhile.

    I hope you are quicker to update this time, Great story, Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Dragon7 on March 31, 2008
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

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  • From ANON - Banii-chan on December 06, 2005
    I love this. Really. This is great. I'd say more, but I'm laughing too hard to type all that well. Looking forward to more.
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  • From Didders on September 03, 2005
    Simply wonderful! I absolutely adore how possessive you made Goku is in this.
    Completely humorous and sweet. Vegeta is of course portrayed beautifully. Profound cursing just adds to him in spectacular ways. I’m sure I don’t need to remind you not to let Vegeta give in any time soon?
    I look forward to more, and possibly when Vegeta does accept Goku as a mate. ^__^

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  • From ANON - Atsim Frotw on July 30, 2005
    Bejita is acctually spelt Vegeta, and, I can't remember how you spelt it, Goku's sayian name is spelt Kakarott. Oh, and "Burma" is acctually Bulma. Your story was really awesome. It was just hard at first to tell that Bejita was Vegeta. Please keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Velika on July 29, 2005
    XD this story is getting hilarious. Oh you got to write more chapters please, hahaha!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 27, 2005
    The name your writing under reminds me of HIM...hee hee and looking at your profile I see why but anyway I love your story!! You're a great writer and it's so funny I couldn't stop laughing! I was so disappointed when chapter 3 ended! Please update soon I'm addicted! I love this!!
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  • From Kugatsu on July 26, 2005
    *rofl* YAY GOKU!

    This story is so awesome! Glad to see you've updated!
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on July 26, 2005
    This strory is too funny... I love the SSJ4 [drools] Goku who walks in and scares the *ahem* bodily functions out of this pest!!!

    Keep up the good work...this is hilarious!
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 26, 2005
    hehe, this is still so much fun. Although I do feel sorry for Vegeta and all the unwanted attention he is getting, I more than Love an aggressive angry Goku.

    *GRINS* Update soon please.
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  • From chayron on July 26, 2005
    It's wonderful. It's funny and smart and gives an unbelievable amount of enjoyment! Goku is being a parody of himself and Vegeta…well, Vegeta is just being himself, only that he learned to play a guitar. Bulma is the same kocky and primpy woman we know. And all that parody of the whole mating ordeal... Just priceless!

    I almost pissed my pants reading the scene where Goku was staying at Vegeta’s door to play a role of a guard-dog. And the scene where Goku was trying to scare Yuri was so funny! I just loved Goku’s thinking process while he was trying to maintain his bad-guy image and was so proud of himself! You manage to make the comical and improbable things you write about so real and so detailed, that they just obsess me and make me believe they are true!

    Again – wonderful chapters! Eagerly waiting for more!

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