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Reviews for Sweet as Honey

By : xkesshoux
  • From ANON - Rayne on October 10, 2005
    Poor Roy.... He and Ed are my favorite characters...
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  • From ANON - vtsfy on October 02, 2005
    CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!
    There, someone told you to do so. Now DO IT, PLEASE!
    I love this fic; it's so in-depth!
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  • From ANON - Ultra_maniac on September 23, 2005
    This story is incredibly written. It's so nice to see Edward with some weakness and Havoc with a back bone. Their relationship is started on impulse and you assume that it's only going to be a one-shot, or at the most a threesome fic. But it's not, you see the desperation that Edward feeling, wanting to have a stable relationship instead of one with a womanizer. It's understandable, Havoc's choices in the fic are often made from his heart, and though you want to smack him upside his head to snap it outta him, the writer here gives you plenty of reasons for why Havoc is acting this way. Not only that, Mustang is portrayed in a way that makes him human. Other writers make him sound so holy, and never wrong, and never makes mistakes. But it's nice to see Roy on his knees(figuratively and literally) because you can sympathize with him. You want him to stop, to get up and act like the Colonel you're use to but if that were to happen, it'd be easier just to hate Roy.

    The story is strong and gets you wanting to see more. Makes you want to see how everything comes to an end.

    The pacing flows and there's never a moment where you going, "But wasn't he just-?" It's completely natural.

    The characters are sometimes a little extreme but in view of the whole story it can be over looked.

    Overall, I can easily and happily give this story a a five out of five, ten out of ten and twenty out of twenty. It's a good story with strong relationships, and characters. You want everything either to end with a cute little bow or everyone crashing and burning(but in a good way). This is one of those fic that makes you proud to say, yeah, that's my fandom right there! "Sweet as Honey" will now always be the Havoc/Ed story that I compare all other Havoc/Ed stories to.
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  • From ANON - CryingCrimson on September 19, 2005
    keep writing! I love where this is going. It's always so hard to find *GOOD* havocxed ficcage... I like I like royxed too... and you've just piled them all into one great story, so please continue on, for I will definitely keep reading!

    *gives you cookies*
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  • From ANON - emerald on September 19, 2005
    I know the feeling, but I love your story. It has a plot, character development, and a story line that hasn't been done to death. Even if you don't hear from anyone else I hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - possessed_penguin on September 17, 2005
    .... o_o .... *has fallen in love* OMFG! You MUST continue!!! If you don't, I'll... I'll... damnit, what'll I do? ...I'll CRY! Not exactly effective but this is a great fic! Please continued it!!!
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  • From ANON - tuna on September 17, 2005
    well. i still haven't reread three all the way through yet, but this chappie made my angst monkey happy. I love the smut, but I love plot too.

    I'm too tired to do a really really detailed review, but if you don't keep writing this I'm gonna beat you with a rusty straw. ^__^
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  • From ANON - K2 on September 11, 2005
    hmm..funny im not much of a reviewer on stories, but I loved the plot ya created, makes it more worthwhile reading. Hope you continue its been a while hasn't it?
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  • From ANON - Kairan Akiyama on September 07, 2005
    I like it! Don't quit! Pwease? *holds up an Ed plushie* Ed-kun wants you to smile. Anyway, I have some fics here too, so if you want to read instead of just writing, drop by. YGO and Beyblade (well, one Beyblade one). Now that the shameless plug is over...

    I LIKE IT! This makes me want to watch FMA now (I've seen bits and pieces.... and want an Ed action figure BAD. what he and Setro and Andromeda could do.... XP) Anyway, no, keep going! I want to see how this plays out. You can't leave me hanging like this. I'll send my villagers after you! >
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  • From ANON - Terry on September 05, 2005
    Go Havoc, it's your birthday! Damn he's all alpha or something, he nailed Ed and Roy. Also can I say: HOT! I only read two chapters so far, but I had to comment before going on. This is great.
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  • From ANON - mauztattoo on September 05, 2005
    I'm enjoying this! The angst and the idea that Roy Mustang isn't getting EVERYTHING he wants is great! Please finish this so i can see where you are going with this threesome (will it end up as a threesome?)
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  • From ANON - wicked_pistil on September 04, 2005
    How have I not commented on this? I could have sworn that I had...

    Anyway, I ache for each new chapter of this. So hot, so much love for all your characters. I love seeing Roy being all vulnerable and *wanting.* So do please keep writing. Your smex is like no other's and I have all of your chapters saved to text files on my computer so I never lose them.
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  • From ANON - nirvana on September 04, 2005
    I'm sorry i haven't reviewed your story yet, but this was the pefect time to comment on how absolutely wonderful and smexyful the whole lovely has been. Plot's are a pain in the arse though, aren't they? Can't write anything without adding something or another. I know how you feel.

    hope to see the next chapter soon!!

    ~Nirvana Renegade Seiga, at ya service
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2005
    I think I have rewieved all of your chappies of Sweet as Honey and always positively ^_^ I really like the Havoc x Ed pairing and Roy x Havoc pairing. The sory is slightly too angsty for my liking but somehow I still like it very much. It is interesting to 'see' the vulnerable side of Roy for a change without making him too...girly. I can't imagine how you will continue the story, but I must admit I hope that it will have something nice for Roy too. Even though Havoc and Roy are awsome together.
    Okay, I'll BEG you to continue the story *begs*
    I have no complains about the...uh plot or anything else.
    Yup, that's it. Write more soon!
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  • From ANON - kat on September 04, 2005
    What! No! Don't stop! I totally love it! I've been reading since the first chapter and I love the fact that it actually has a plot, pretty good at that. I feel sorry for all three guys, though, and I hope for a happy ending. Nevertheless, whatever you decide will be good, just don't leave them heartbroken like that, Please O.OKeep writing!!!
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