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Reviews for The Last Temptation of Edward Elric

By : sailormac
  • From Safir84 on February 06, 2008
    Shit, this was so good, it was almost like watching the anime, I totally loved it! The plot was great and the character descriptions were awesome as well, and the the fic was very well written, which I loved! Furtermore the twist was absolutely priceless, I mean; Mustang as a matchmaker, hehe, what a wonderful idea!

    Thanks for sharing such a delicious story with us, and the smut was pretty damn hot as well!

    Well done!


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  • From ANON - Luca on January 29, 2006
    If that wasn't absolutely funny and sweet and hot, I don't know what was! Excellent twists, wonderful character and a lovely dash of angst!

    By far, one of my favourite FMA fics! Love the pairing too! ^_~
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on October 26, 2005
    Amazing!
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  • From ANON - Hikaru Irving on August 04, 2005
    Oh, that IS rich! lol, and here I was thinking that Roy wanted to take Ed back. *snicker*
    Now I've got another story idea . . .
    *slaps her forehead*
    And I thought the best FMA triangle was Envy/Ed/Roy . . .*snicker*
    KEEP WRITING!
    ~*~*~*~Hikaru Irving~*~*~*~
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  • From ANON - lolo313 on July 06, 2005
    I think you should make a sequel where Al is back to normal and he follows in his brother's foot steps with russel's brother. i think it would be an awsome story. please please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Asidian on July 04, 2005
    *griiin*

    Okay, this was just fantastically cute. It's rare that you run across a Roy-as-past-lover fic and rarer still for Ed to be with Russel. Nicely characterized, nicely written, and oh so deliciously dirty. ^__^

    Roy as matchmaker is -hilarious-. Nice stuff. XD
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  • From ANON - Ri on July 04, 2005
    I loved it! ^_________^
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  • From ANON - Sherri on July 03, 2005
    This was SO good and just... hot! I love how you wrote vocals into the sex scene. It's a nice change from most of the stories that just describe the sex scene without elborating on any talking, etc. This was a very good story, and I hope you will continue it -- or if you don't continue this story, I would love to see more Edward x Russell writings from you. I love Edward x Russell (it's my damn OTP but it's WAY too hard to find!) and this is probably the best Ed x Russell I've read. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on July 02, 2005
    cute! It's a very good beginning. It will be interesting to see where you will take this. (I'm assuming this isn't a one-shot since Roy always has a ulterior motive behind what he does...)
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on July 02, 2005
    hot damn that was hot. I loved this, pulled me in and had me captivated from the first line. Keep up the good work.
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