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Reviews for The Sexual Adventures of Edward and Winry

By : MissB
  • From ANON - P.C. on July 05, 2005
    Another wonderful Winry x Ed story! I like the way you write your stories, but I think you could do a little more foreplay. Yeah, definately more oral stuff=P
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  • From ANON - Beautiful Blood on July 05, 2005
    Hmmm...first off, I LOVE the story. FINALLY!! SOME MORE ED AND WIN SEX!! Not that I'm against yaoi...just, we need more Ed and Win. Anyways. Story was good. I loved it. Man, I want to be Winry in this story!!
    In response to your survey thingy, I think the phrase "i'm coming" its...too general. Too many people use it! I think the best way to fill that is just to have them scream. "I'm coming" Kind of kills the whole romance part of the fic. Maybe something like "I think I'm going to explode" Would be better? No clue...but...yeah. VERY VERY Good fic otherwise!!
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  • From ANON - Michael Bulaich on July 05, 2005
    This is a cute story. Please continue. Ed and Winry forever.
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